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Jun 08, 2023

God, this chapter hit extra hard for me.

That bit about "being different is a sin" and the part after that where Tsukishima talked about how he tried to get over his addiction, felt very, very real. There's just something very unique about your story. It feels like I'm watching a Wong Kar Wai movie at times, the story just flows in a disjointed, but eerie parallel to real-life kind of way.

If anything, I feel a bit bad because I think that your story isn't the kind that the average light novel reader would appreciate. But I'm really invested sumi. Very strong identity to your story that I can't find anywhere else in this contest.

Musubi

Chapter:7

Jun 08, 2023

Sorry, spotted something:

"I sorry Mr Tsukishima..." should be "I'm sorry"

Musubi

Chapter:6

Jun 08, 2023

Pretty privilege gets you far, but people are ugly all the same.

The word of the Lord has spoken. Amen 🙏

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:5

Jun 08, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

This is me. Back's already creaking like a door 😭😭😭

Maniavolution

Chapter:7

Jun 08, 2023

To:WALKER

Strategy is for filthy casuls.

"If bonking doesn't work, bonk it harder." -Guts

Maniavolution

Chapter:7

Jun 08, 2023

To:Cas_Cade

Why? Because her name's also Alice?

She'd prolly call gamers all over the world and troll them instead xD

Maniavolution

Chapter:2

Jun 08, 2023

To:A. Hoshino

I'm putting your comment on my wall. I'm a professional now hehehehehe ❤️❤️❤️

Maniavolution

Chapter:1

Jun 07, 2023

To:Deleted User

Yea it's VR, but more immersive. So like in Chap 1 where Jason vomited after spinning too much or Chap 4 (I think) where he chilled under the lava like he's under a waterfall, the headset doesn't just provide visual stimuli, it triggers the relevant electrical impulses, tricking the brain that the body is feeling the specific sensation even though it actually isn't.

Of course, since it's a game and all, pain is deactivated and locked lol (don't try modding it!)

Maniavolution

Chapter:7

Jun 07, 2023

To:Deleted User

Spot on. Just thought that it also worked as a cool sounding gamer tag lol

Maniavolution

Chapter:5

Jun 07, 2023

Sigh...

Alexa play un-Ravel.

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:4

Jun 07, 2023

To:A. Hoshino

I feel the other comments have already covered quite a lot, so I'll drop by again once the new batch of chapters has been uploaded and I'll add whatever I think is useful! (likely pertaining to the plot)

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

"He licked his lips in expectation."

Immediately triggered the "HEHE BOI" response in me lol

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

Jun 07, 2023

First off, I love the new cover! I like the colours you used, they definitely suit the nature vibes of your story.

Speaking of nature, all the berry picking and stuff reminded me a lot of Ark Survival Evolved lol. I like the attention to detail you put towards these moments, so I'm curious to see what's coming up for the next major plot point!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

"Rainbow puke known as RGB lights"

FINALLY. Someone agrees with me! The first thing I do when I get a laptop with RGB keyboard is to lower the backlight brightness and just keep it to a static colour lol. Hurts my eyes just as bad as light mode zzz

There's a Reason I Don't Want To Know Who's Behind the VTuber

Chapter:5

Jun 07, 2023

This chapter reawakened one of my favourite sayings that was hidden in my brain lol

"Money talks, but wealth whispers"

Feel like it perfectly suits this chap ❤️ thanks for bringing back that hidden memory for me, Pearl!

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:4

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