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Jun 07, 2023

To:Deleted User

Yea it's VR, but more immersive. So like in Chap 1 where Jason vomited after spinning too much or Chap 4 (I think) where he chilled under the lava like he's under a waterfall, the headset doesn't just provide visual stimuli, it triggers the relevant electrical impulses, tricking the brain that the body is feeling the specific sensation even though it actually isn't.

Of course, since it's a game and all, pain is deactivated and locked lol (don't try modding it!)

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Chapter:7

Jun 07, 2023

To:Deleted User

Spot on. Just thought that it also worked as a cool sounding gamer tag lol

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Chapter:5

Jun 07, 2023

Sigh...

Alexa play un-Ravel.

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:4

Jun 07, 2023

To:A. Hoshino

I feel the other comments have already covered quite a lot, so I'll drop by again once the new batch of chapters has been uploaded and I'll add whatever I think is useful! (likely pertaining to the plot)

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

"He licked his lips in expectation."

Immediately triggered the "HEHE BOI" response in me lol

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

Jun 07, 2023

First off, I love the new cover! I like the colours you used, they definitely suit the nature vibes of your story.

Speaking of nature, all the berry picking and stuff reminded me a lot of Ark Survival Evolved lol. I like the attention to detail you put towards these moments, so I'm curious to see what's coming up for the next major plot point!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

"Rainbow puke known as RGB lights"

FINALLY. Someone agrees with me! The first thing I do when I get a laptop with RGB keyboard is to lower the backlight brightness and just keep it to a static colour lol. Hurts my eyes just as bad as light mode zzz

There's a Reason I Don't Want To Know Who's Behind the VTuber

Chapter:5

Jun 07, 2023

This chapter reawakened one of my favourite sayings that was hidden in my brain lol

"Money talks, but wealth whispers"

Feel like it perfectly suits this chap ❤️ thanks for bringing back that hidden memory for me, Pearl!

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:4

Jun 07, 2023

To:Lihinel

Owh yeahhhh!

What I had in mind was Overlord's/DnD's Create Undead type of abilities, but yeah items would make sense, too. As long as it made endgame mobs/bosses lol

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Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

To:Kitsune

Not exactly a spoiler (will be explained later on), but Lvl 1 players start out as Adventurers. At level 10 they can undergo class advancements and become more specialised i.e. Thief, Warrior, etc.

Jason's HP is 0 / 0, so he's a tank no matter what he specs into 🤣

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Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

To:Lihinel

Oh no...I actually don't get what you mean by "Dead Branches" 😭😭

Only thing that comes to mind is some Digimon that cannot are stuck on some evolutionary lines, hence dead branches, but I think you're referring to smth else, right?

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Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

Hearing that from you love the way she fights makes me soooo happy 😭😭😭

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Chapter:6

Jun 07, 2023

To:Lihinel

There will be characters with those kinds of names, but I prefer to word them as what the characters will say/read them as (i.e. Jason instead of Json) so that it flows more naturally. General Erection was initially General Ere₵tion (so that the game doesn't detect a no-no word), but I thought to hell with it lol.

I actually tried naming myself General Erection in various games. "Erect" is a banned word lol

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Chapter:5

Jun 07, 2023

To:dmznot

Hey Dhamas! Thanks so much for reading my entry ❤️❤️

Yeah, Spin2Win is in like most games with Berserker/Warrior classes lol. RO, Diablo, I think Dragon Nest as well. MMO gold standard haha

Yay! Glad my self-promo worked ❤️❤️

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Chapter:1

Jun 07, 2023

To:Lihinel

Lava is the same as water. Just a different reskin lol 🤣

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Chapter:4

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