Jun 30, 2023
Hey ryba! Sorry, I could've sworn I've read more chapters of your story before this, but turns out I only read the first 1 @ . @
Ok, maybe it's just me, but I feel that Cursed Lines really became a lot more interesting these past few chapters. The early chapters were a little too slow/peaceful? (idk how to say it) for me, but it's when we start to learn about Kiyoshi's parents, that's when everything started to click for me.
No pun intended, but once we learn about Eros, that's when I really started to read between the lines lol, noticing a lot more details that I didn't notice in the earlier chapters. Kiyoshi and Alice have this very cool dynamic going on. IMO, I kinda prefer them as they are, tho...idk I may be wrong, but is she the love interest? The story feels like it's setting them up that way, but idk what's wrong with me, I like them the way they are now 😭 Who knows, with how this chapter is ending, maybe something really cool will happen that'll change my mind, and I'm definitely looking forward to it.
But yeah, reading your story has been quite a mind-bending experience for me, in a good way. I feel that my expectations were subverted throughout, and I have a feeling that this is where you're really gonna kick things up into second gear. It's mysterious, strangely magnetic, and I'mma blame my internet provider for not letting me read your story peacefully. Maybe it's coz I got a "Cursed Line". Heh.
Ok bye I'll go and jump off a building.
Kipidap 💪🏻
