Jun 04, 2023
I was prepared for wholesome romance, not this 😭😭😭
But in all seriousness, that's a killer synopsis. I clicked because I saw the word "vtuber", but I think your story really has an interesting take on the trope. Especially in the 2nd chapter, anybody who's ever spent enough time down the rabbit hole would know how shocking and sad it is to hear about a graduation.
Story-wise I just hope Ai/Mai lives somehow. Like, I don't know how it could be wholesome if she doesn't 😭
Just some feedback though, you might want to revisit your 1st chapter. I feel that introducing all the members of Legends is a bit overwhelming, like it's hard to connect with so many characters at once. It's okay to just focus on Ai and her condition, because I feel that's what carries the most weight in the chapter. Her genmates can be introduced later on, I feel.
