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Aug 23, 2021

Alright I catch up. I will say, a lot of the dialogue that you write here would probably infuriate me in an anime, but it actually reads a lot better in book form than it does on the screen. Some of it still kind of bugs me to be honest...I'm trying to think of what bugged me right now....anyway

I think part of the reason could just be the construction of the book. In a lot of the anime there's like an attempt to like posture a lot of these characters as like real human beings, but Kohei's perspective is kind of interesting because that's not necessarily how he views them. Maybe there's too much like reliance on the archetypal/caricatured nature of these characters, but I think in some instances like with Mari and Yukimura I've kind of come around on the way they say things and then how Kohei internalizes them.

I feel bad for Mari especially in this instance because she just constantly changes her persona to kind of fit what she thinks Kohei would want, but for a number of various internalized and 4th wall breaking reasons, it's kind of clear that Kohei is either incapable of understanding or doesn't want to. I think in this sense the whole childhood friend/MC dynamic is sort of explored in sort of interesting ways.

The grading system adds like a nice backdrop to it because in spite of Kohei's reservations and complaints about it, the irony I feel is found in the way that Kohei essentially mechanizes his relationships in similar ways. This latest chapter is kind of evident of that. The other thing that stands out the most is when Mari is upset, the way he kind of resolves the conflict is to just spend points and then go make food with said points, it's like falling back on transactional methods is how Kohei copes with not being able to properly understand human emotions. I don't know if that's necessarily what you sort of wanted to push, but it's just something I gleaned from what was going on.

As for the narrative and other things uhhh....there was that kind of abrupt switch after the Post-Modern arc, but it wasn't that bad. I feel like I have other thoughts, but they might just be re-litigating things I've brought up before so it's not really necessary to spew them again at this point.

Good job desu

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Why I Write
Chapter:22





Aug 22, 2021

It was many and many a year ago,
In a kingdom by the sea,
That a maiden there lived whom you may know
By the name of Annabel Lee;
And this maiden she lived with no other thought
Than to love and be loved by me.

I was a child and she was a child,
In this kingdom by the sea,
But we loved with a love that was more than love—
I and my Annabel Lee—
With a love that the wingèd seraphs of Heaven
Coveted her and me.

And this was the reason that, long ago,
In this kingdom by the sea,
A wind blew out of a cloud, chilling
My beautiful Annabel Lee;
So that her highborn kinsmen came
And bore her away from me,
To shut her up in a sepulchre
In this kingdom by the sea.

The angels, not half so happy in Heaven,
Went envying her and me—
Yes!—that was the reason (as all men know,
In this kingdom by the sea)
That the wind came out of the cloud by night,
Chilling and killing my Annabel Lee.

But our love it was stronger by far than the love
Of those who were older than we—
Of many far wiser than we—
And neither the angels in Heaven above
Nor the demons down under the sea
Can ever dissever my soul from the soul
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;

For the moon never beams, without bringing me dreams
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And the stars never rise, but I feel the bright eyes
Of the beautiful Annabel Lee;
And so, all the night-tide, I lie down by the side
Of my darling—my darling—my life and my bride,
In her sepulchre there by the sea—
In her tomb by the sounding sea.

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UnCrowned
Chapter:12