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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Oct 12, 2025

If you die in the game, you die in Canada.

Gaming for a Second Chance at Life!!

Chapter:2

Oct 12, 2025

At least he gave them the option of paying for the window repairs. Pretty merciful for a demon lord, if I do say so myself.

J-1: Angel of Death

Chapter:16

Oct 12, 2025

Ash lost the game, but all I could think of every time "the game" was mentioned was Gatchaman Crowds.

Gaming for a Second Chance at Life!!

Chapter:1

Oct 12, 2025

To:Caelinth

In your defense, that was a lot more obvious before I added all the omake chapters to the end.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:20

Oct 12, 2025

To:Mai

Hopefully in a good way. 😉

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:2

Oct 12, 2025

To:FireFly Seia

That's actually a typo. It should be "Mayday". Thanks for catching that.

As for the other two, those get explained in time.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:0

Oct 04, 2025

Usually I comment, "congrats on finishing," at the end of a novel, but considering the MC of this one, I'll avoid the double entendre.

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:35

Oct 02, 2025

To:Huey Linh

Hey, at least you finished it. Lots of people never finish. Bot now that you've finished once, you've proven you have the stamina to do it again, better next time.

I'm doing fine. Hope your week is good as well.

The Female Leads Have Eyes For Only Me

Chapter:1

Sep 28, 2025

You're about 1000 words short of the minimum word requirement for the contest, and there's just over a day left before the deadline.

You might already be aware, but I wanted to message you in case you weren't. Honeyfeed can count words slightly differently than word processors.

Manifest Merge: Fused With A Goddess

Chapter:1

Sep 28, 2025

Did you know you're 5,000 words short of the minimum word requirement for the contest? Honeyfeed lists your word count at 44,925, and the minimum is 50,000.

I hope you see this message in time. There's only a little more than a day before the deadline.

The Female Leads Have Eyes For Only Me

Chapter:1

Sep 15, 2025

Huh, interesting that some people actually get a choice. I bet the MC would have appreciated one.

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:23

Sep 10, 2025

You can tell it’s fiction because no one would ever request Fablefence in real life, not even kids.

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:18

Sep 07, 2025

It just struck me that the MC gives me Patrick Stewart “but I’ve seen everything” vibes.

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:15

Sep 05, 2025

I enjoy a good macaron, but maple bacon seems like a nonbo with the texture.

Time and Time Again

Chapter:2

Sep 05, 2025

What if the teenager’s bedroom is on a submarine? Now that I think about it, that seems like it should have been the setup for a 1960s sitcom.

Anyway, congrats on grossing me out.

THE RETURNERS – ISEKAI RESCUE AGENCY

Chapter:13