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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Feb 07, 2026

"From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me…"

Body of Theseus

Chapter:1

Feb 07, 2026

SIIIIIIIX SEEEEEVEN!

Something’s Wrong With June

Chapter:3

Feb 07, 2026

Edward…

Something’s Wrong With June

Chapter:2

Feb 07, 2026

To:FireFly Seia

She crossed Hina’s line. Even if Sachiko was right, Hina couldn’t stand to see her treat Yasu like that.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:13

Feb 06, 2026

I thought I was so clever after reading the first few paragraphs. “Yeah, that’s a cool idea for a shield,” I thought, “but you need to protect your ship from all angles.” Then, lo and behold, that’s the reason the protagonist is awake to begin with.

Traveller In The Dark

Chapter:1

Feb 05, 2026

To:Taylor J

Me too. Or at least, I'd like to think so. But shock can really delay your response and cloud your thinking. Plus the physical exhaustion of being tentacled would slow you down.

It’s Like Tentacles on Your Wedding Day

Chapter:2

Feb 04, 2026

The ending’s left ambiguous, but I’m getting Sympathy for the Devil vibes from the last thing the man said.

The Last Prey

Chapter:3

Jan 31, 2026

Ohhhhh. THAT kind of citrus.

From The Inside

Chapter:1

Jan 24, 2026

Kitty!

Congrats on finishing! Best of luck with the judging.

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:19

Jan 24, 2026

To:Kirb

At least two instances of foreshadowing, by my count. Three if you count earlier in this chapter.

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:16

Jan 24, 2026

Mittens 😭

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:12

Jan 23, 2026

I get like that all the time. Did I lock the door. Is the stove turned off? The oven? The heater? The sink? Do I have my keys with me?

And I’ve never been hounded by paparazzi.

Shattering Stardust

Chapter:5

Jan 23, 2026

Looks like a lot of people already left long comments, so I won’t do that. I’ll just say that this story made me feel strong emotions, and most romance stories on this site don’t do that. So good job.

Congrats on finishing. Congrats on being the final SR entry before the deadline. I know you value that for some reason. Good luck with judging.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:34

Jan 21, 2026

Come to think of it, does anyone else in this story even know that Kerochanfan exists?

…

I just realized, it’s Kerochan’s alt, isn’t it?

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:31

Jan 20, 2026

This chapter triggered my old man sentimentality. I’m sitting on the bus on the way to work trying not to cry in public.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:25

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