Dec 23, 2023
Appropriately enough, I'm sitting in an airport lobby waiting to board a flight of my own, reading this story.
Congrats on finishing! You definitely delivered on the twin promises of yuri and action. I feel like I learned a lot about how to write lighthearted flirting by reading this.
At the start, the Renka-Kasumi duo was my favorite pairing. That hit and cold combo was great, but I really like what you did with Hikari and Tsubaki in the last few chapters.
Congrats again on finishing. I enjoyed the story, and looking at all the illustrations in the Google doc. Your passions really came through. It seems like you left it open for more at the end. I don’t know if you’re planning to do another writing project, but best of luck if you are.
