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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.
What is an Achievement?
Oct 13, 2025
Twink mentioned.
But, you know, maybe the cultists have a point.
Oct 12, 2025
I think I get it now, but “solid liquid” had me scratching my head for a bit there.
Weapons of mass creativity is a clever term.
Maids are scary, indeed.
The men have to be brooding and mysterious because edgy teenage boys think it's cool, and fujos think it's hot.
Interesting quirk of the physics system in The Game if heavier objects fall faster.
If you die in the game, you die in Canada.
At least he gave them the option of paying for the window repairs. Pretty merciful for a demon lord, if I do say so myself.
Ash lost the game, but all I could think of every time "the game" was mentioned was Gatchaman Crowds.
To:Caelinth
In your defense, that was a lot more obvious before I added all the omake chapters to the end.
To:Mai
Hopefully in a good way. 😉
To:FireFly Seia
That's actually a typo. It should be "Mayday". Thanks for catching that.
As for the other two, those get explained in time.
Oct 04, 2025
Usually I comment, "congrats on finishing," at the end of a novel, but considering the MC of this one, I'll avoid the double entendre.
Oct 02, 2025
To:Huey Linh
Hey, at least you finished it. Lots of people never finish. Bot now that you've finished once, you've proven you have the stamina to do it again, better next time.
I'm doing fine. Hope your week is good as well.
Sep 28, 2025
You're about 1000 words short of the minimum word requirement for the contest, and there's just over a day left before the deadline.
You might already be aware, but I wanted to message you in case you weren't. Honeyfeed can count words slightly differently than word processors.