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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.
What is an Achievement?
Jan 15, 2025
dys (defenestrate yourself safely)
To:Hype
Not that either would admit it.
Jan 14, 2025
Oh no, now my brain won't stop trying to figure out what they could possibly get up to with a freeze ray that anyone would enjoy.
To:Makech
Honestly, I did forget about this book. And then I saw it pop up in my notifications and was psyched for new chapters, but it fell behind in my priorities because of the contest. Glad you're posting new chapters again!
Fingers crossed!
Jan 13, 2025
I haven't read this yet, but congrats on making it just before the deadline and just under the word limit.
To:Slow
High praise indeed. Thanks for reading!
To:obliviousbushtit
A bit late, but thank you! And thanks for reading it all the way through!
That’s what I’m hoping, but also what I’m worried the most about. The start of the story is much harder-edge mercenary cyberpunkish sci-fi, and then here comes all the little sister stuff. It might catch people off guard. Like people who only want the sci-fi, not the weeby stuff.
Jan 12, 2025
I absolutely do not want to imagine the memes and waifus the US government will come up with the next time they need to sell war bonds.
Rejoice, Zipper! You're important after all.
Jan 11, 2025
War is bad, horu. What a brave take.
To:Steward McOy
And swapped.
Whoops. It was supposed to be the chapter title of the previous chapter. I got them mixed up. It's a Gundam reference to go along with the Gundam reference in that chapter.
To:Pope Evaristus
You don't mean the contest word limit of 75k, do you? Because You're at 45k now, and there's only around 48 hours left in the contest.
Jan 10, 2025
The dark humor really gets me. I laughed and cried at the “almost all” line.
