Jan 08, 2025
To:Just Another Adult
Thanks so much for reading all the way to the end, and for your thoughts. I do wish I could have written a story about twice as long, but my schedule and the short contest deadline didn’t permit it. Perhaps I should have aimed for a simpler story given those constraints.
Even with twice as any words, I need to figure out better ways to let the story breathe than a bath chapter though.
I like the way you phrased it as a waltz pacing toward the end. I definitely felt that pattern while I was writing. Things were more spaced out and not as regular in the initial outline, so you’re not wrong for feeling it wasn’t ideal.
Thanks again for reading!
