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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

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May 04, 2025

The opening of that chapter had serious morning after vibes.

I'm In Love With My Catgirl Classmate, But If She Meows at Me One More Time, I Will Lose It!!!

Chapter:27

May 03, 2025

I thought you were joking about including fucc before the contest deadline.

I'm In Love With My Catgirl Classmate, But If She Meows at Me One More Time, I Will Lose It!!!

Chapter:26

May 02, 2025

At this point, I honestly can’t see a believable redemption arc for Anna. She’s gonna cling to that hate for the rest of her life.

I'm In Love With My Catgirl Classmate, But If She Meows at Me One More Time, I Will Lose It!!!

Chapter:25

May 02, 2025

OK. NOW congrats on finishing. And best of luck with the judging!

What is 'love' in Japanese, Iwasaki-kun?

Chapter:37

May 01, 2025

Congrats on finishing! (I think?) Make sure to mark the story as finished before the deadline, otherwise you’ll be disqualified.

(And you might want to remove the El Salvador joke. While I personally thought it was funny in a dark way, the mention of real-world politics might work against you.)

What is 'love' in Japanese, Iwasaki-kun?

Chapter:36

May 01, 2025

To:Cashew Cocoa

I know, right? What a gut punch.

I'm In Love With My Catgirl Classmate, But If She Meows at Me One More Time, I Will Lose It!!!

Chapter:24

Apr 30, 2025

To:Mara

Thanks! It really helped me get into the world to write this. I didn’t originally plan on publishing it.

And thank you for reading till the end! I’m glad you enjoyed the world building for the gynoids. It’s a concept I like so much that I keep trying to make it catch on with readers in many of my books. (And because I am a man of few ideas.) Hoshinauts is my far the most successful though.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:27

Apr 30, 2025

I knew exactly where that was going when I saw the copees for rent sign.

It’s kinda cute how Fire derisively calls the younger kids nerds then berates them for not knowing very specific details about his niche interest.

Capmon: Cyan Seas Version

Chapter:29

Apr 30, 2025

What a useless teacher. What a terrible idea. I called it. It's one thing to give space and a microphone to a marginalized person. It's another thing altogether to force a spotlight onto them, especially in an unsupportive environment.

I'm In Love With My Catgirl Classmate, But If She Meows at Me One More Time, I Will Lose It!!!

Chapter:24

Apr 29, 2025

You’ve got an incomplete sentence. “Besides, Serina

I think there was one line that in a recent chapter that I forgot to point out.

What is 'love' in Japanese, Iwasaki-kun?

Chapter:35

Apr 29, 2025

To:Mara

This is a real thing. In fact, some of the events in this story are inspired by real-life things that happened on the ISS or during the Space Shuttle program.

Decompression sickness is also sometimes called the bends. Deep sea divers have to be careful about it when coming back to the surface after a dive. Basically, the air we breathe isn't pure oxygen. There are other elements like nitrogen in the air, and our body absorbs some of them. During a sudden change in pressure, nitrogen can be released into the bloodstream, forming nitrogen bubbles in your blood. These bubbles can form anywhere in the body. When the form around your joints, it can cause joint pain. However, when they form in the brain, there are a number of very bad things that can happen, from dizziness to death.

Before spacewalks, astronauts and cosmonauts will typically hang out all night in the airlock as the pressure is slowly lowered. Not so much that it causes problems, but as low as is safe for a human. They'll also breathe pure oxygen through a mask for a while to try to purge the nitrogen from their blood, as Hina does in this chapter.

Cosmonauts don't have to be quite as careful because their suits maintain a higher internal pressure, at the cost of them being more rigid and difficult to move around in. That's why Sachiko and Yasu opt for the Russian airlock, so they can be ready to back Hina up sooner.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:14

Apr 29, 2025

To:Mara

They had their suspicions. Erika was forced onto their crew by the government, but the government isn't known to employ young girls outside the space program. The Hoshinaut program is also filled with the best and brightest teenage orphans in the federation. But Erika's smart, competent, and wasn't in the space program. That means Erika's either not an orphan, in which case the government wouldn't risk sending her into space, or she wasn't a teenager, even though she looks exactly like one. And how do you get an adult to pass for a teenager? Magic.

So they've always had their suspicions, but they never knew for sure. Yasu was acting confident because it was a bluff, but it was a poor bluff, and that's partly why Sachiko was upset. Yasu played the hand they had all been saving poorly.

The Hoshinauts

Chapter:13

Apr 28, 2025

The cover promised sweet, slice-of-life GL with a robot, and I'm happy to say it delivered. You did a good job exploring emotions in this book, an I especially appreciate how much of a stumbling block it was for both of the main characters until they talked about it and worked together, and how they both but effort into it.

Best of luck with the judging!

Transcendental Equation

Chapter:33

Apr 28, 2025

To:Himicchi

Ah, I misunderstood. I thought Cyan understood Nyaro because she had been turned into a Capmon previously.

Capmon: Cyan Seas Version

Chapter:28

Apr 27, 2025

Harldy the most romantic confession from a human point of view, but an appropriate one given the circumstances. Glad they finally talked about it.

Transcendental Equation

Chapter:32

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