Dec 21, 2024
To:Joya
Location descriptions are definitely a weak point of mine. I've been trying to keep them a bit minimal, to fit with the shot chapter word counts, but I can't blame it all on that. The biggest challenge of writing is translating the vivid images in your brain into words that others can understand in a way they find entertaining.
I do wonder if I should be more repetitive about some descriptions though. Others have said they had a hard time imagining the village, even though I described it as a large domed area with mostly farming fields and little huts housing nekomimi and machines.
