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Steward McOy

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Hobbyist writer, attempting to improve. Criticism welcome.

registered at: Jun 26, 2021

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Dec 10, 2024

Wheezing at this story within a story. A thousand years in the future, people who talk and dress like they’re from the 1950s read a story written and set in our time, with modern slang but set up like a golden age comic and referencing an event from the 1920s? That’s a lotta layers.

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:3

Dec 09, 2024

That process sounds highly unpleasant.

The Nietzsche Protocol (TNP): The Cult

Chapter:1

Dec 09, 2024

Oh no, is it too late to change my best girl?

I love the idea of a brightly-colored future, but It’s going to be reeeeal awkward when the EPA bans A-Polymer for being a known carcinogen. 😜

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:2

Dec 09, 2024

This is truly the Breaking Bad of maid isekai.

Isekai Cleanup Service

Chapter:3

Dec 09, 2024

To:Lucky Lane

Giving them the internet was a mistake.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:1

Dec 09, 2024

To:kazesenken

To he honest, while I was writing this, I kept asking myself if it was too soon to be writing about lockdowns.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:10

Dec 09, 2024

To think, the ranch coat guy could have gone into the antique store at any time instead of waiting outside. He could have been sushiing is up for who knows how long, but he waited until Randy sold him the oven.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:14

Dec 08, 2024

RIP Finland. Didn’t even live on as a beer mascot.

I gotta admit, when Zipper started feeling old at 24, that hurt. It was hilarious, but it hurt. Because I understand the feeling of suddenly realizing that years have passed in the blink of an eye. But also, 24 is still so young.

Anyway, glad to see you’re giving the contest one final go, and that I lucked in to not competing in the same category again.

I don’t really do the best girl/boy thing, but I guess Nat?

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:1

Dec 08, 2024

To:Pope Evaristus

It's a twist I wanted to unfold over a longer period of time, but I'm really feeling the contest deadlines. Didn't feel great to compress that plot point into a few paragraphs in this chapter—it was like I was repeating my pacing mistakes from last year—but sometimes you gotta publish and move on.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:9

Dec 06, 2024

I’d definitely be jealous of and want to swap places with a catgirl who’s financially set for life.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:5

Dec 06, 2024

I already said this on Discord, but congrats on finishing. I think I’ll need another quick read through before leaving a review, but I felt you had really strong characterization throughout. Even if I couldn’t empathize with Avery, he has complex, realistic motivations and was internally consistent.

Best of luck with the judging.

An Ode to the Stars

Chapter:20

Dec 05, 2024

To:SkeletonIdiot

Nailed it.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:13

Dec 05, 2024

To:lolitroy

Average lowbrow anime plot.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:13

Dec 05, 2024

Oh no, we both have scenes where a human asks to touch catgirl ears. I promise I’m not copying you.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:4

Dec 05, 2024

To:Taylor J

Absolutely. I'd trying my hardest to pretend the suitcase contains something else and/or not think about it.

Neko Nuke Nightmare

Chapter:2

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