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Jan 26, 2022

To:Deleted User

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Guardians of Dawn: Volume 1

Chapter:5

Jan 26, 2022

To:Deleted User

That good shit, if you know what I'm sayin

Guardians of Dawn: Volume 1

Chapter:5

Jan 26, 2022

damn

Web novels are people too!

Chapter:1

Jan 25, 2022

Nice chapter. Feels very much like its building up to something here, especially with the library, because fantasy libraries are always normal and peaceful. Jokes aside, liked the chapter, cant wait for more

Guardians of Dawn: Volume 1

Chapter:5

Jan 20, 2022

To:Wolfy

Solving fiction right here

WholeSum

Chapter:1

Jan 20, 2022

sao time

WholeSum

Chapter:1

Jan 19, 2022

Found Reed

Guardians of Dawn: Volume 1

Chapter:0

Jan 11, 2022

Like the ending. Really wraps everything up well. great job

Silent Night

Chapter:6

Jan 03, 2022

hmm interesting. Ill see what I can change. Thanks for reading

Forgiveness

Chapter:2

Dec 31, 2021

Dang the first part of this chapters wack lol

Beyond Waters

Chapter:5

Dec 28, 2021

WE ARE BEAUTIFUL

TOTALLY FINE.

Chapter:7

Dec 28, 2021

Oh god, wtf. This is darker than your other christmas story

TOTALLY FINE.

Chapter:6

Dec 28, 2021

Wtf am i reading

TOTALLY FINE.

Chapter:2

Dec 28, 2021

To:ocrali

Bruh legit, this is incredible. Thank you so much for this. Now to fix them lol

Forgiveness

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2021

To:Bubbles

I think experimental describes this style well tbh. Think its interesting also that most the things you pointed out were the parts of the style I struggled with. While the whole mechanism style was what I was going for, looking back, I can see several places I can improve it, as well as several things you pointed out
tho tbh, I'm glad you think its a step up, and hope to improve this as time goes on, Thanks for reading

Forgiveness

Chapter:1

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