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Aug 18, 2021

To:fujisprouts

Thank you so much Fuji!

This chapter is one of the few things I’m really proud of in the second half of the book, it’s probably the reason I kept this story in and tried to rework it.

Thank you so much, only one chapter left, I’ll see you at the end! ❤️

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:39

Aug 18, 2021

Stellar chapter.

I don’t know what else I can say in my comments because you just keep doing the same things superbly and you’re going from strength to strength.

Even in these action less chapters the strength of your dialogue keeps things just as engaging as when there are fists being thrown. Slick and punchy, that’s the best way to describe it for me.

Fantastic chapter.

UnCrowned

Chapter:11

Aug 17, 2021

To:Nellien

Ah thank you!

Have not proofread this at all since I was just pumping them out on the side, I'll fix that now.

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:6

Aug 16, 2021

I think I might have an idea who this is but man he’s creepy!

Also lovely for some confirmation on Elias’ part! I was wondering if that was going to remain just subtext.

Midnight King

Chapter:21

Aug 15, 2021

To:Sevenlock

😐

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:12

Aug 14, 2021

Sexism? In my Midnight Fights? I am shocked and appalled!

Midnight King

Chapter:20

Aug 14, 2021

To:Aero

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The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:34

Aug 13, 2021

To:Sevenlock

That’s what you’re thinking about? Interesting.

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:11

Aug 12, 2021

To:fujisprouts

I think Kai can just plain be scary!

The character shifts are very hard for me, trying to make all their voices sound distinct, happy you like them!

Only a few chapters left now, we're nearly there! ❤️

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:37

Aug 12, 2021

To:Nellien

I don't know why you've subjected yourself to this, but thank you all the same.

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:1

Aug 11, 2021

It’s so sad to see Honey oppressing gamers 😔

Midnight King

Chapter:18

Aug 11, 2021

I'm surprised to hear you struggle with scene flow at all, yours flows so smoothly to me, I've never noticed an issue!

And happy to hear you like my scene flow! Always tough to know if I'm not putting enough in when I go for such a dialogue heavy style.

Hope you enjoy the last few chapters ❤️

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:35

Aug 11, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

With the Mallory scenes, I've been trying my hardest to convey the feeling of what it's like for her to see these things. The glitch text and the style of description is most of the, I'm happy that it seems to have worked for you!

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:37

Aug 10, 2021

To:Pearlyn.M

Don't blame me, blame Kinoko Nasu.

https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Nrvnqsr_Chaos

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:13

Aug 10, 2021

To:Sevenlock

You've got to learn to let go man

Vorelando Magic

Chapter:10

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