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Just a lonely person writing what's on his mind Age:-19
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Aug 01, 2021
I am nice in the writing department. So I don't know much about writing. But I can feel what you are writing. Then there's only one word that comes out of my mouth, that is nice... Anyway, pls try to review my novel if you can. It will help me a lot. Thanks
To:Hachiman
Hachiman will read my novel. It's like my dreams come true. Lol..
I see you haven't changed your prompt yet. You must change it. Otherwise, you will be disqualified. As for the chapter, it's nice as always.
I only came here because your name is Hachiman and I like that person. We are more like brothers. Your story feels very nice. It has a good start. hopefully, you will continue writing it. Pls, try reading my novel too. Thanks. ( btw there are two novels of mine. So chose wisely. )
Jul 31, 2021
Did I read Vol 1 in just one day? I guess I did. Looking forward to vol 2.
To:WaddlesPlays
You can say author has good taste in music....hehehe.
I can only say One thing... nice.
Why does everyone in the novel can easily read the protagonist's expression so easily?
Is she a mind reader or expression reader? And is she sure? That she is not into him. Well, that's love for you.
Nice chapter. I agree with waddlesplays. There is one thing. You used the word legal two times. First when his mom helped miyake to get ready. Okumuri said it. Second when he was holding teddy bear, miyake said it. Two people said the same thing. It doesn't feel realistic. That's what I feel anyway. Again this is fiction. So anything can happen. I hope you will under what I am trying to say.
Love the mc, love the story, love everything. This is something I was waiting for. I like the way you explained everything. I will be waiting for the next chapters, so keep up the good work.
But she is just a fictional character. So you won't find her in real life and even if you find someone like her. She won't come to you....
I also wonder.
I have one question. Did you write about the dream he had?
Personal Harem! a stalker too! Lol. I see. Okumuri 's fans are increasing...
