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Just a lonely person writing what's on his mind Age:-19
What is an Achievement?
Jul 31, 2021
To:WaddlesPlays
You can say author has good taste in music....hehehe.
I can only say One thing... nice.
Why does everyone in the novel can easily read the protagonist's expression so easily?
Is she a mind reader or expression reader? And is she sure? That she is not into him. Well, that's love for you.
Nice chapter. I agree with waddlesplays. There is one thing. You used the word legal two times. First when his mom helped miyake to get ready. Okumuri said it. Second when he was holding teddy bear, miyake said it. Two people said the same thing. It doesn't feel realistic. That's what I feel anyway. Again this is fiction. So anything can happen. I hope you will under what I am trying to say.
Love the mc, love the story, love everything. This is something I was waiting for. I like the way you explained everything. I will be waiting for the next chapters, so keep up the good work.
But she is just a fictional character. So you won't find her in real life and even if you find someone like her. She won't come to you....
I also wonder.
I have one question. Did you write about the dream he had?
Personal Harem! a stalker too! Lol. I see. Okumuri 's fans are increasing...
Love how story is proceeding
Jul 30, 2021
You hadn't described how Kojima looked like. did you?
To:Dante
Spoiler!!!
To:Hiroaki
I can't say that it will have the same effect. But I tried my best.
Seriously boy!! I won't share the information about the broth. It's top secret. lol. I feel that if I were in the place of protagonist. I would be the same. I like how the story is going. But some parts feel unreal. It's fiction anyway. So I can't complain.
