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registered at: Jul 01, 2021

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Aug 03, 2025

Bro, your Format is messed up.
I think it is a pasting error. Please try to fix it.
If I am correct. Kiran is an Indian name. Can I assume that the story would include a little of Indian mythology?
If that's not the case. You should definitely include it. It will elevate the lore even more.

Rise of The King

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

To:Eliza Kane

Ah, I get it now.

The Blind Huntress (short light novel)

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2025

Proofreading using AI can mess up your story. I don't know if you have used it.
But there are some fragmented parts. Like one tree. No animal. No fruit.
If you did it intentionally. You can just ignore it.
Still imagine reading it. (Peace out)

I Died Over a Misunderstanding... Now I’ll Save Lives in Another World

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

I had a little hard time keeping track of 2nd person's dialogues.
It has a strong opening, and the rest of the story is also catchy and mysterious.
I hope it leads to something amazing.

Power of the Seed

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

The sentences are fragmented. Maybe you did that on purpose.
Perhaps you used an AI like ChatGPT to proofread your work.
You should probably write complete sentences. That's my opinion anyway.
This is your story. You can write it however you want. (peace out)

The Hero Who Shouldn’t Exist

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

First, he thinks,
Did I lose my memory?
Then the following paragraph says, I remember walking into my room...
then suddenly... Is this an isekai?
That was way too fast.
You got an adaptive MC...

The God Who Chose an Introvert

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

"You took life from my shadow."
I don't understand.
Did she kill his shadow or something?
If yes, then shouldn't it be," You took the life of my shadow."
Or is he saying she is hunting in his area? (So, does the shadow mean his area?)

The Blind Huntress (short light novel)

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2025

Good stuff. I like your writing style. It's clean.

The Blind Huntress (short light novel)

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

I don't understand. Where is the story? Or is it like a personal diary or something?

The Case Reports of Scientific Curses.

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2025

Well, that was short. Anyways, good start.

The Case Reports of Scientific Curses.

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

Mc is going insane talking to pippa😭

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:3

Aug 03, 2025

First, who is Pippa? Is it the furry thing that Mc was talking to? Is it a legendary creature that will grant mc power? Or it's like a Pokémon.
I didn't understand why they were trying to kill him. He said, The system doesn't make errors. SO die? What die?
Maybe in the next chapter he will awaken his power or Pippa would help him?

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2025

Nice start, it has everything that isekai have nowadays. System, good Skills, bad skills, A hero, side characters... and most importantly, a system error. Maybe Mc would unlock a hidden feature of the system, or he couldn't level up, or he would be thrown away like trash and seek revenge. Some girl will try to protect him, probably the fml.
Let's see where the story goes...

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

How does she know his name?

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2025

How not to summon a demon lord?

Our Perfect Isekai World is Spoiled by a Demon Girl?!

Chapter:1

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