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Aug 02, 2025

To:Kẻ khờ

Thanks alot for sayin that. ✌️

Please just leave me alone

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2025

To:Kumkali

Thank you very much.

Please just leave me alone

Chapter:1

Jul 26, 2025

You have nice pace for your novel.

Brown Sugar Cinderella

Chapter:3

Jul 25, 2025

To:Caravellum

Well, in the next chapter, you'll know how he was wounded and why I emphasized it so much. 😀

Please just leave me alone

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

To:Kaorin

Well, I am also writing a novel and would love to have your views on it.

Saving the World through the Power of Shipping

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

To:Kaorin

There are many, but here's an example.
"In the spirit of good Cooperation I will tell you." Should be "In the spirit of good cooperation, I will tell you," or "In the spirit of cooperation, let me tell you."
I think the thing you're missing is punctuation in the sentences. I am not a pro and a non-English speaker. So, I don't know what to tell you.
You can use Grammarly while writing or any AI to proofread your work.
another Example
"I am not about to wake up, then I may as well play along." (I don't understand what you're saying here)
It could have been written in a better way
Something like,
"I wouldn't wake up, so I should play along." (Optional)

Saving the World through the Power of Shipping

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

To:TheLasagna

Oh, I get it.
And I also like long chapter. Maybe you misunderstood my tone.

After Just Barely Graduating College, I Was Sent To Escape A Prison From Another World

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

Nice story.
You should definitely do something about those big chunks of text. You should try to break them into smaller paragraphs ✌️
Please help me review my novel as well ❤️‍🩹

Raptures & Regulations

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

Beautifully written chapter, but pretty cliche, of you ask me.
Magic school, beast folks, discrimination, weak mc, hidden power.
I wonder what hidden he would have.
Nice goin

Even in Another World, I'm Still Not the Main Character

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

A beautiful chapter, I'd say.

Misanthropic Reincarnation: Learning to Love in Another World

Chapter:2

Jul 25, 2025

It may be just me but dialogues are difficult to understand.
Again it maybe just me.

Saving the World through the Power of Shipping

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

That was really a long chapter. I think you should add more definite details. Eg girl of average height, wearing average clothes... It doesn't add flavour to imagination.
You could say something like hair just above the shoulders ( short hair), someone who doesn't care about trends etc ..
Well, every writer have their own way of writing. You don't have change anything if you don't like the idea.
✌️

After Just Barely Graduating College, I Was Sent To Escape A Prison From Another World

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

Well, that was a quick start.
Mc is very adaptable. 🙂

CSI: Another World

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2025

15 sounds like a mischievous kid. 🫠

The Heracle's Diary - My Story in Another World

Chapter:4

Jul 24, 2025

To:Ramen-sensei

Sure!!

Please just leave me alone

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