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Hello, I'm Joe Gold. I'm a writer of web novels and short stories, all set in my own original multiverse.
I'm a lifelong anime, comic book, and video game fan, and my fiction is often reminiscent of the series I grew up with.
What is an Achievement?
Jul 17, 2021
Now I'm curious as to where this is going.
Now I'm excited for the Midnight fights. I wonder what kind of villains will be there. Will they use martial arts or no?
Oooh, Honey's getting an attitude like John from unOrdinary. I'm wondering why she is so obsessed with Sinstagram.
Jul 16, 2021
Want a slasher of your own creation in the story? Leave their name, costume, and slashing weapon in the comments (for example: Mantis, praying mantis costume, and Japanese sickles), and I'll put them in as a minor character!
There way you lay out your sentences is very easy to read. Very light and breezy. I'm getting the impression from reading this and other works on here that this is the preferred style. Maybe I should learn from that.
To:Ryan Towse-Voller
Thank you!
Jul 15, 2021
I like it. Simple but memorable. Your paragraphing is interesting to me to. Very light and breezy. Easy to read.
To:swzoo
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Thanks!
To:fujisprouts
Oh and I changed the news networks' reward for winning the Death Game to 'a king's ransom'. I don't know where I was going with the Mansa Musa idea. š
š Thanks! I based Puck on Power from Chainsaw Man and Bad Girl from No More Heroes, so I was aiming for her to be a fan favourite.
Jul 13, 2021
You'll get used to it. Just takes a bit of practice.
Now this is starting to remind me of unOrdinary. Very good. I like that you've established the main villain early on. That's something I should do. So is Sinstagram like a mix of Instagram and Worldstarhiphop? I feel like the battle for social media popularity is a meta metaphor for very competition. I was feeling a little like Honey getting no attention at the front of the class until you liked Slashers. I word to the wise: make your characters name's as simple, short and memorable as possible so that readers can remember them from reading to reading. I remember Honey, Misha, the King, and Charlotte Belle, but these side characters' longer titles based on appearance are getting me confused, and I read this one minute ago.
Aw, poor Honey! I'm getting Watamote flashbacks. Well, at least she's found one friend in Misha.
Big fan of the rollerskating aspect already. I wonder if that will play a part in how Honey fights in the Midnight Fights.
