Aug 15, 2021
As I probably mentioned before, I'm re-reading stuff with a clear mind this time so I suppose I should comment once again~
For your story, this prologue seems to be an ideal route to take. I still find it really hard to believe that you're new to writing LN, because much of your fundamentals are looking solid to me.
If I had one thing that I'd personally suggest to reflect on in terms of adjustments, it'd be the "flow" or "tone" of a few things.
For example, we're told that we're dealing with an android, but then, suddenly at the very start of the prologue, they already want to vomit because of isolation (which is correct me if I'm wrong, uncommon with humans too). Then it shifts to describing her (amazing) figure before we're sent off to chapter 1.
Don't get me wrong, these are great things to have in a WN/LN, but I'd suggest spreading this stuff out more in future chapters, so that the tone and imagery of this short, concise prologue is maintained.
Then again I could be the one who's misunderstanding the type of story this is, so take it with a grain of salt. I'll be continuing along, so I look forward to your content as I read. Cheers~