Mar 06, 2018
First of all, I gotta admit that since you posted three chapters in a single day that means you have written the whole novel and have finished it, right?
"...No matter how cold, they'll always wear a skirt" This is the best sentence haha. I love it when light novels make fun of these tropes.
So the MC is a guy but instead of being 35 years old, is now 17 years old (and in another body).
The story is great, but personally the chapters are too long for me. (I think you could have divided this chapter in two chapters.)
I like the theme of suicide and I love seinen, so I want to see where this is going.