May 19, 2023
Very well-written. The descriptions can be somewhat vague at times, but for the most part I can find myself envisioning the scenario. Of course, you’ve told me a bit about this, so I have a slight advantage in knowing what’s going on, but it’s pretty understandable nonetheless.
My one criticism is in the portion at the beginning taking place in the real world— I don’t know if I missed some descriptions, but I couldn’t really see what the environment was like. Was it in a courtyard? Another lab? And what exactly *is* a terminal? And how does a virtual robot break it? A lot of this isn’t fully clear, and that might be the intention. I’m just stating what I saw. And again, I’m in school and directing my attention towards both my history teacher and this book. I’m not even looking at the screen as I’m typing this, heh.
Arufa out.