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Sep 15, 2021

Eve is supposed to feel more like an observer than anything, I had hoped to slowly characterize her while seeing the important characters and their dynamics through her eyes.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:18

Sep 15, 2021

Yep, one of Elly's biggest problems is not taking help when it's offered.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:17

Sep 15, 2021

Fair enough.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:16

Sep 15, 2021

I'm still not sure if/when I should make that known tbh.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:15

Sep 15, 2021

Yes, exactly. Dragons and apples are her two great passions.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:14

Sep 15, 2021

Because she might be after Blake's dragon eggs.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:13

Sep 15, 2021

Good, that was the idea.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:12

Sep 15, 2021

Fair enough.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:11

Sep 15, 2021

I know I probably should, but I like them all so much. They all have their own stories, I don't like the idea of characters just being there for the sake of moving the plot. I don't know if the blow to the pace is worth it, though...

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:10

Sep 15, 2021

It's just you, lol. I think I read the first two books when I was a little kid, but I don't remember liking them much.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:9

Sep 15, 2021

That would be quite a plot shift, can't deny I'd like to see that.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:8

Sep 15, 2021

Reordering is definitely a possibility. I've received similar comments. Another thing to consider is that this story isn't just about Blake. I'm introducing a lot of characters because they're important. If it feels like the story is going nowhere or the cast has no goals, that isn't far off, it's somewhat a slice of life at the beginning, just about getting to know the cast slowly.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:7

Sep 15, 2021

Drat, I thought I had fixed all the grammar issues, thanks for pointing it out!

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:6

Sep 15, 2021

Yeah, the beginning is kind of slow. It's setup, a lot of setup.

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:5

Sep 15, 2021

I'm not sure what the cultivation genre is, but it's not exactly that (though it's similar).

The Heir of the Dragon

Chapter:4

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