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Sep 12, 2021

Can someone please explain to me how this experiment is beneficial for humanity? All I'm seeing is massive downsides.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:35

Sep 12, 2021

Lmao I think the only thing dumber than trying to make unstable super soldiers is torturing them so that they'll hate you.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:34

Sep 12, 2021

This seems a little, um... cost-inefficient. I don't know how much work was spent on these guys, but sending them through an experiment like this that just kills them off is like flushing money down the drain. No wonder our economy is in the toilet.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:33

Sep 12, 2021

"We never let our emotions interfere with our work!" John yelled.
Not helping your case there, John.
I feel like there should have been a psych test involved in this, unless the adrenaline is causing emotional issues. Which, I think it probably would lol. It's an adrenaline RUSH for a reason. "Regulate your emotions! And while you're at it, here's another dose of a drug that will make you go nuts!" Good old CIA.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:32

Sep 12, 2021

I'm still not sure how increased adrenaline gives you a healing factor.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:31

Sep 12, 2021

Assuming, for the moment, that this experiment works, these guys are going to be in for a rough surprise, as we've seen from Akihiro. Adrenaline rushes aren't exactly good.
That being said, I don't think the CIA would be the ones to do this sort of thing. This feels much more like an army experiment.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:30

Sep 12, 2021

I think it takes a little bit more to join the CIA than just being willing to kill somebody lmao.
And just fyi, artificial adrenaline rushes aren't going to be a good thing. They won't have the positive attributes you're assigning them, if anything it will probably make the subject more vulnerable and inevitably kill them. Overabundance of adrenaline has very debilitating effects on people.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:29

Sep 12, 2021

One thing, it should probably be "professors" of Harvard, not teachers.
Richard seems kind of unnaturally competent for an 18 year old in his first year. It would probably make more sense (and probably not be too big of a plot problem) to make him a grad student, because he seems a little too worldly without much reason for it (considering he's antisocial and basically does nothing).

Crimson Soul

Chapter:28

Sep 12, 2021

I'm confused. Between Richard first running into him (heh) in Chapter 2 and now, what's he been doing? Sitting on his hands? It feels off that he hasn't been making attempts on him this whole time. So why now? Curious...
And why did he give Akihiro his card!? I'm still trying to figure that out.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:27

Sep 12, 2021

Natsume returns once again to show that nothing has changed and he's still as unlikable as always.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:26

Sep 12, 2021

More good moments between the two of them. But it feels like these "what is this feeling?" moments should have come earlier, before he reached this stage. It feels like we skipped steps, and are backtracking, rather than organic progress. Something like this when they were still more or less "friends" would have been a lot more impactful before, as compared to now, when he already knows he pretty much likes her.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:25

Sep 12, 2021

This moment with Ayane and Akihiro felt a lot more organic, so that was good. There needs to be more time to let the cast breathe. That being said, the fact that she's ready for a date not so long after she just saw him go on a rampage (and now doubts that he's even human) is a little... odd.
And Rumi x Natsume? Ugh, why? What about that little toad is even remotely appealing? I don't understand at all.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:24

Sep 12, 2021

This felt like way too much of a rush. Like, suddenly he's a bloodthirsty monster, with nothing to suggest that before. It's jarring.
And it feels like people are way too easily forgiven in this series. They just don't feel real, they feel like they're being told to act by the script. Stuff like this needs to sit more, Rumi was bullying Ayane like, what, 5-6 chapters ago? And now they're all good?

Crimson Soul

Chapter:23

Sep 12, 2021

I feel like this story hasn't spent enough focus on Akihiro's emotions. Something like someone devoid of emotion developing them should feel gradual imo, and this felt more like a switch being flipped. It feels like one chapter I was reading about a robot, and now I'm reading about a person.
And I also find it strange that Rumi is so gung-ho about hanging around and watching Ayane flirt with Akihiro. Considering her character until this point, it doesn't really seem to make sense that she would have taken that so well, especially splitting up to go with Natsume and leaving the two of them alone. I still don't have a very good feel of her character.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:22

Sep 12, 2021

It honestly doesn't make sense to me how much Akihiro has changed. It all feels kind of inconsistent, honestly, considering how human he's acting so quickly, while so robotically at different moments. I'm not sure how to interpret it.

Crimson Soul

Chapter:21

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