Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

She's actually not supposed to be older... she really is 15. In hindsight I conveyed that really poorly, the "or have an extraordinarily skilled teacher" line was meant to imply a dichotomy; she was either an adult, or had a skilled teacher, and because she had a skilled teacher ergo she really was 15.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

No lol, the flame was more ceremonial than anything. Dragon eggs don't need incubation. They hatch whenever the plot dicta...
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Ahem.
I mean, whenever fate determines the time is right.
But temperature's got nothing to do with it, it's a magic bond sort of thing. (This will become a plot point in later books)

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

It's the good shit.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

It wouldn't have been any more than a "keep your mouth shut" hiss.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

I wonder...

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

Rip, sorry. People are people.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

Yep. It's one of the things that I hate to write. It's Aria's biggest flaw, and she's totally being an irresponsible teacher here.

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Sep 11, 2021

Hmm, this chapter seemed very... interesting. There's certainly a lot of stuff being hinted at, but I'm a little confused by the lack of concern for the guy who got into a car accident, seems like people would call somebody.
Also, Richard just giving his card to an accident victim seems kind of weird.

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Sep 11, 2021

Hmm, I'm not sure I really liked the introduction of this MC. He doesn't seem like a very interesting character to follow, I don't have much attachment to him. It seemed very much like we were being told stuff about him, rather than experiencing it through him.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

Good point. Mindy is pretty weak to pressure, and Sabine wanted them to keep quiet about it, hoping it would blow over. I should probably have mentioned that somewhere, in hindsight. But I sort of felt it would go without saying, given Sabine's obsession with her image.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

Maybe she just likes having sex.
Not saying it's a good or bad thing (half is probably too many for a 15 year old) but Taylor does have her own views.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

Headline: Teenager makes dumb decision because he thinks he knows what's best.

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Sep 11, 2021

To:Workaholic

Sabine has the somewhat-unfortunate habit of seeing the worst in people that she doesn't particularly like.

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Sep 09, 2021

To:Real Aire

I'm glad. I'm sorry the beginning kind of drags, but with all the setup I introduced it's really hard to avoid.

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Sep 09, 2021

To:Real Aire

Thank you for your praise! I put a lot of work into it. And I know so much of it is long, and drawn out, but I really tried my hardest!
Especially my epilogue, that one was pretty long, but intentionally so. Just wanted to introduce the class.

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