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May 16, 2025

TITLE DROPPPPP

man if the foreign languages club was real I’d definitely join 💔 maybe then I would finally have some friends..

i love the group tho they all belong there i must say you have done well deck of cards

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:17

May 16, 2025

Tbh this could be a cool story but I feel like there isn’t much in it for the reader. Like you’re saying “this happened” and “she/he said this” and all of that, but there is no actual emotion or idea for me to digest and enjoy.
It seems like you’re only telling little stories here and there and not portraying what could be a larger picture (ie the full story). And you’re telling it without any real context pertaining to how the characters (especially Mika) feel and are impacted by the events taking place. Like I barely know who this kazuya guy is. It seems like Mika has warmed up to him a bit but that’s it. And the whole finger cutting scene happened so quickly that I didn’t even really process it as gruesome.
I can see what you’re trying to do, but it’s sort of hard to thoroughly get invested

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:6

May 16, 2025

ah... the childhood friend might just lose once again...

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:16

May 13, 2025

another PEAK CHAPTERRRR AND AS USUAL SHIRAI NEEDS TO GO 😭
THIS IS ONLY GETTING BETTER I LOVE IT

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:15

May 12, 2025

what did i just read..

WHAT DID YOU JUST WRITE 😭

WHAT IS THIS.

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:5

May 12, 2025

PEAK CHAPTER this was probably my favorite so far. it was absolute chaos and i loved it. also i gotta say charl has been a great addition to the cast

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:14

May 11, 2025

To:Leblunk

AWW BLUNKY

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:4

May 11, 2025

To:Orionless

my boy just posted ANOTHER chapter 😭

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:4

May 11, 2025

To:Leblunk

so should i read both blunky

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:4

May 11, 2025

To:Leblunk

FINE IM DROPPING THIS AND READING THAT

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:4

May 11, 2025

she really is a loser dog..

[CONCEPT] Makeinu no Tōboe [Howl Of The Loser Dog]

Chapter:3

May 11, 2025

To:Deck of Cards

he holding back too much from his past 💔
thanks for reading tho i honestly didnt expect u to check this out but u are GOATED for doing it anyway deck of cards my best friend

A Coward’s Comedy

Chapter:1

May 10, 2025

To:Deck of Cards

LMAO UR REPLY IS SO OUT OF CHARACTER

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:11

May 10, 2025

he folded 😔 Anita is the only one who can weaken his resolve

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:12

May 10, 2025

YOO HES A BUM HES A FRAUD

Ambition and the Foreign Girl

Chapter:11

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