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Apr 13, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

LMAOO MY BAD FOR ASKING

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:8

Apr 13, 2025

To:Han Quixote

Im dying 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Thanks for the heads up I shall now go to 1.3 then

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

Apr 13, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thanks my friend. Youre too shrewd for this world

Also I have a question.. are you bald irl?

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:8

Apr 13, 2025

Might be spamming you with this but you DID in fact cook

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:8

Apr 13, 2025

Last line made me laugh 😭 not because it’s bad just cuz I know the backstory behind it

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:5

Apr 13, 2025

To:Han Quixote

Bro our discussions were like 75% of what made me get this silver badge LMAO (it does look really nice tho)

I’ll check out 1.2 and 1.5.. I hope I’ll be hard shipping Abigail and Victor by the end

Also YES dude when I don’t get enough sleep and have a deadline it’s like I think the world would be better if it burned down. How wise of you han quixote

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

Apr 13, 2025

To:lolitroy

tbh i can sorta see what youre saying. with the split povs it could feel like theres some dissonance. ill see what i can do

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:7

Apr 12, 2025

momo cant catch a break man.. i was thinking sharla was a decent person until she made that deal 😞

Sales Pitch

Chapter:19

Apr 12, 2025

To:Honeycalcitecreature

ill be rooting for lyra

A Coward’s Comedy

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2025

To:Han Quixote

DUDE NOOO WE WERE SO CLOSE 😭

if i saw another premature ending dude idk what i wouldve done LMAOO

i believe in you man. personally as a reader i wouldnt care too much about a plothole like that but some others probably would. YOU GOT THIS BRO. LMK IF THERES ANYTHING TO REREAD ILL GLADLY DO THAT :D

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

Apr 12, 2025

WHY IS ALL THE DIALOGUE BOLDED AHHH MY EYES

The Death on Green (and the cat who always lands on foot)

Chapter:1

Apr 12, 2025

To:Han Quixote

by the way, in victors monologue, i think there was a little mistake: "The only option is to fight perpetually or to OR give up..."

should i keep pointing these out when i notice them?

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

Apr 12, 2025

To:Han Quixote

the dedication is REALL i respect it

alr so ive read about your two prototypes and.. yeah maybe you made the right choice. if only those three were the ones u could see fitting in with the story, then this was prolly the way to go. also that victor monologue was TOUGH dont get it twisted 😭🔥

now i know i always say this.. but this time i mean it. im VERY interested to see where you take the story from here. im honestly drawing blanks when i think of what victor could possibly do after this, or even what anyone else could possibly do. we'll see i guess.

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

Apr 11, 2025

To:Han Quixote

you have a point there. in theory, it makes sense. maybe it was just the execution? idk. i actually did like the chapter though it was just this

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

Apr 11, 2025

To:Han Quixote

so i just read the ending of 1.3 and that was pretty good ngl 😭

i have a little more context and have put a little more thought into it now, and.. ITS STILL BAFFLING TO ME. BUT i can see that abigail is currently a wreck, and that makes me think.. its like every inherent force of her body is telling her that its wrong, but the ideals that she tries to live by are telling her "who am i to stop him." brain vs heart i guess.

im sort of having the same reaction of her heart, and many other readers probably would too. its like, any human would think that the choice would be obvious, but because shes abigail kovacs and has these ideals she simply cant settle on that obvious choice.

.. interesting.

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:30

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