May 11, 2025
To:kaenkoi
cant conclude much as of rn, but i can say that there isnt much to draw from rn. like we get that hes living the depressed corporate life and hes going thru the motions and stuff, but thats pretty much it. if i am to read further, itll be solely for the premise. just cuz i think its a cool idea. not really for the characters or setting that youve established.
im not saying its bad though (youre legit only 2.8k words in). id say it all depends on where u go from here tho. take from this what u will