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Apr 16, 2025

To:Orionless

maybe im reading too much into it ngl..

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:34

Apr 16, 2025

To:Han Quixote

YES THAT FMA OPENING IS FIRE

i really liked how abigail showed expression and all here, but one thing actually just came to my mind: doesnt her behavior here sort of contradict her letting victor go? i know you explained it and all, but it still sort of feels misplaced here. then again, she might just be fully confident in the idea that victor will come back and do whats best for humanity. but still, im a bit surprised that atlas, and nobody else for that matter, even questioned her on victor and how there is a sort of inconsistency in her thinking (at least to them).

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:34

Apr 16, 2025

Awww man Abigail is so innocent

This guy atlas has toooo much rizz bro.. LMAO im joking im joking
I like how there was a title drop in this chapter. It finally happened 🥹

It was ANOTHER chill one though, which isn’t a bad thing. Things have calmed down since the absolute chaos from before. Seems like you gave each of the three stooges a chance to talk with Abigail one on one, which I guess works to develop bonds for each of them. Not a bad idea. It fits her character too, seeing as how she will listen to anyone and everyone.

You know what this story reminds me a lot of at this point in time? Fullmetal alchemist. Abigail is literally riza Hawkeye lol. Victor is mustang but weak. Atlas is hohenheim. Julian is… Julian.

On a real note though 😭 a lot of hopefulness in this chapter. It gave me a nice feeling. I can’t really say much until I see what this leads to, but so far I can tell you’re doing a lot of buildup.

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:34

Apr 16, 2025

To:Deck of Cards

To be honest I did NOT expect you to catch up like this. Thank you so much deck of cards
Im also surprised that ur enjoying it haha hopefully it only gets better from here
I gotta catch up on your story too 😭 sorry about that Ive been busy but I will do it DECK OF CARDS

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:9

Apr 16, 2025

To:Deck of Cards

There could’ve been but I think adella is too levelheaded for that 😂

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:8

Apr 16, 2025

To:Deck of Cards

You don’t know how happy this makes me deck of cards
That’s exactly the feeling I wanted you to get from each of them
Thank you so much deck of cards

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:6

Apr 16, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Tbh 7.8/10 is still a fairly good score 😂 and how did I know you’d point that out about Midas..

I guess the eccentric will be eccentric

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:9

Apr 16, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I definitely enjoyed the story. Also youve made me realize that this whole thing was quite literally cherry world. Like jeter was telling the story from the characters pov… Thats actually kinda peak. My only qualm was that the ending felt rushed. The last chapter ended off in a way that implied that there would be like.. a large climax or event that would take place. But then it ends. I’ll say it again: i dont hate the ending, but it definitely felt like there could’ve been more than just “you want me to wake up? Fine I’ll do it…” (I know Thats an extreme distortion of it but Thats sort of what it felt like. In a story as convoluted (and interesting) as this, it felt like the ending should have been just as complex and layered. But it’s completely up to you in the end my man, if you, as the author, think this is the best way to end it off, then by all means ignore this cuz im just one dude passing by with a thought

Sales Pitch

Chapter:22

Apr 15, 2025

To:Han Quixote

LMAOOO ONE CENT ONLY 😭

I genuinely laughed at this bro. I honestly didn’t expect a reaction like this tbh. All I can really say is I hope I surpass your expectations haha

I gotta say though this has been the hardest story I’ve ever had to write. So if things go south.. you know why 😭 but I’m REALLY interested to see how you receive the upcoming chapters so I’ll see you then my GOAT

Another Twisted Normality

Chapter:9

Apr 15, 2025

i have.. so many mixed emotions...

my first thoughts were: ITS ENDING ALREADY?!?!? NO FINAL ARC?!?! NO BATTLE THAT EVERYTHING HAS BEEN LEADING UP TO?!? NO BIG BOSS!? NO SILAS COMEBACK!?!?

i dont know why this actually hurts me. there were a lot of things i wanted to see.

i cant say its terrible though. its bittersweet. i realize that its from jeters perspective. when he ended cherry world, he ended this too. in a way, it makes me sadder than a momo death scene ever could, but also.. very empty.

i really, really liked jeter. and this chapter makes me feel for him more than any other character. but its just crazy to me still. hard to process that this is how it ends

congrats on finishing though

Sales Pitch

Chapter:22

Apr 15, 2025

okay bro so my original comment was marked as bot activity (??????) but tldr: chill chapter, i find it strange how the everharts actually havent seen their family yet (usually would be a given), i have a strong feeling that alice will be a big part in the end game, and WHY do i have a feeling that abigail will die

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:33

Apr 14, 2025

"flattened him under my rump" is CRAZY 😭 ALSO FIRST

My Personal Warrior

Chapter:6

Apr 14, 2025

To:Han Quixote

YOURE SCARING ME BRO

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:32

Apr 14, 2025

To:Han Quixote

wdym cheer yourself up? are you sad? :(

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:32

Apr 14, 2025

To:Han Quixote

the dbz references bro.. 😭 might be a sign

Mr. Atlas

Chapter:32

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