Mar 14, 2025
Lol bucket head was the highlight of the chapter for me
Now that I’ve caught up, I’d like to say that I can sort of see where this story is trying to go (unless you end up surprising me) and I think you’re doing a pretty good job so far of setting up the world for that. The only thing I really want as of right now is to have a better grasp on the personalities of the characters, especially the main two. But I’m sure that comes with time.
Things are looking good so far though. Keep it up.
