Aug 19, 2021
To:znf
Holy! Thank you for the feedback! Alright, first up with the double spacing. I copy paste from a word processor which has the paragraphs in single spacing but this website screws me over, and so I fix them by pressing enter every paragraph. Doesn't seem to work too well. Secondly, grammar issues. Yep, gotta edit them soon, but I am not an editor so some (which you tell me is a lot) pass by me. Thirdly, with the confusing dialogue. It stems from the same problem as the first, and some of these dialogues too pass by me, but I will fix them once the last chapter is posted. Alright, I have the simplest vocabulary set I have ever have, but I try to explore words as much as possible, Most of the time, I don't find them, or I was too dumb to find them. As for the Magic and Aura, I chose not to reveal much, but I guess it causes too many problems. Will, of course, fix. Thank you for giving the time on reading my story! It means a lot. You have no idea.
