Jun 01, 2022
Mine's different. I like long paragraphs, so I'm part of that niche market lol. Though, I think it's not a matter of overly-descriptive paragraphs. It's more on how you format paragraphs.
I feel like the next chapter will have more dialogues, but I hope you'll have a respectable amount and size of paragraphs.
One thing that bothered me though was the contacts. Where'd he pull that from? The bedside table or from his pocket? I mean, he wasn't in his room, so...
