Jun 12, 2023
To:Feyblue
Going through it again and I must say, it flows a lot better! The old part about skills, while absent in this version, doesn’t affect my understanding of things too much, and the added banter with Kei’s friends really helps liven up the overall mood of the chapter, so great work!
Also, as a Fate fan, I can’t believe I missed the joke with Dairokuten Maou Nobunaga. Shame on me xD
