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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

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Nov 04, 2022

To:まやくろ

Thanks, I'm really greateful for you reading stuff from me and for your comment here😊, it'll all work out in the end orobably😄👍.

(P.S. Do you have a book of your own or are you a reader only? 😊)

Former Home of 'UnderCurrent - Can You Break The Cycle' - Now available of Royal-Road and Scribble-Hub

Chapter:0

Nov 04, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thanks Tomo, and thanks so much for reading all the way😄😍 - Once its all finished i may eventually put arc 5 & 6 here after they're done elsewhere, but ya this aint my prioty no more.
Tis what it is.

But seriously thanks for reading man, hope you enjoyed the story so far😄

Former Home of 'UnderCurrent - Can You Break The Cycle' - Now available of Royal-Road and Scribble-Hub

Chapter:0

Nov 02, 2022

Is Han going to be an antihero?
I mean this fortress is way too defended considering he doesn't know yet what sorts of threats it might face - Nor does he know if he put it in a good place (Though perhaps he could teleport it as needed).
He also has some fairly nefarious thoughts towards people who might enter😅.
I think our dude might have a few screws lose😂

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:3

Nov 02, 2022

Interesting personally Han I'd try not to make the minions sexy, dont wanna mix work and pleaure ya know😉😅.

Speaking of, i think the repeated use of the word 'Butt' is a bit jarring - Your prose is quite good, so it just takes me out of the moment to have such a basic word come up repeatedly😅

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:2

Oct 31, 2022

Man this chapter is sweat in all sorts of ways.

Getting to see Doon, Adan and Celia is great - And even the first 'on-screen' appearance of Hal's sisters as it were?😄.

Lots of little bits of intrigue too, very enjoyable and a nice way to get the ball rolling on the fiances thing.

Oh and Happy Halloween 😄😊👍

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:185

Oct 31, 2022

Our boy Hans total lack of reaction to his situation is facinating - He's had a rough day and i like how he just kind rolls with the isekai as though in a hazy lucid dream😄

Creation: The Path of a God

Chapter:1

Oct 24, 2022

Two awesome chapters in a row!

Really solid job showing Trancreds intelligence thus chapter and i like having him also be someone odell has a connection with through his father😄😊

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:183

Oct 22, 2022

Wow Gary mod got some serious patches! (Is that too obsecue a reference? Sorry lol😂)

CREO: Game of Creation

Chapter:3

Oct 21, 2022

Ho dang, the constant normalised wars straight out of 1984 - The world made distopian by technological advancement - This is a really neat set up😄

CREO: Game of Creation

Chapter:2

Oct 21, 2022

Really strong intro - You've got a very solid voice for our protag from the start and the first person fight was nice and consise too😄.

Took me a while to get here but looking foward to this😁

CREO: Game of Creation

Chapter:1

Oct 18, 2022

To:Ochroleucous

One of my favourite fight so far for sure😄💪

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:182

Oct 16, 2022

K so... The chapter title is uninspired - There I said it!😅😉.

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Seriously what a chapter - I got flashes of Qrow from Rwby, Nero is a clear matrix reference when dodging bullets and Hal, holy fuck Hal!

It's been a while since we've had a fight and what a fight we got😍 - It's got movement and variety, the simple image of a tacky Vegus venue to keep it easy to follow.
And dang Hal, buy some cheap spears and load that beast up, you should be using it like a spear chaingun my man😂 - But seriously, he knows how to use alot of skills, he might be as good as Rheba in the right circumstances!

Really awesome chapter😄👍.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:182

Oct 16, 2022

Dang Gywn, my man😕😕.

Ablebard tho, he be a bro it seems😎

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:180

Oct 09, 2022

To:AWiddleStar

I was kinda hoping you might say something like that - It seemed to me there was more going on beneath the world's surface and honestly I'm excited to see it all if you write more books😄.

I think it's great you wrote it, and Did so amazing to boot - I'm certainly glad Kaze mentioned it to me as it was a great recommendation.

Here's to more volumes someday😄😉👍.

The Wanderblood Princess and Sir Try Hard

Chapter:25

Oct 09, 2022

To:Ochroleucous

No rush😉😅, just doing my weekly reading rounds tbf😂😂 I'm a creature of habit, Resh reading included😉

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:179

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