Momentie

Momentie

Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

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    Jul 11, 2022

    Oh dang short chapter, guess I've caught up, hurrah!

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    Early days so not sure how much of use I can say yet but I'll fire out my current thoughts;

    - Like with your previous work, I find your stuff requires a settling-in period of sorts.
    This isn't a bad thing but rather a plus, your writing style always feels very dlibrate with little wasted words and pruprosefull pacing - This does I feel make it a bit unapproachable for newcomers perhaps, seeing Tomo's comment and remembering back to my early ones on circular - I think it's fair to say that you work is unique in a good way but one that could turn people off.

    I'd also love to know what all your codes and such are - My dude Orcali was always better at interipting that so I'll leave it to him to decipher your chapter titles in the future perhaps😂.

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    Overall I think my first comment is still apt enough - Gainx madness crossed with Azomanga Daiobh, which so far I like😄.

    That said unlike circular we are so far lacking any difintie plot goals, grounding or much reliable/stable world building - Knowing you most of this is deliberate, so it'll be interesting to see where it goes😎👍.

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    I'll also back up what Tomo said on this chapter - Look after yourself, post when ready and as an alternative to updating chapters, simply do a part1 & 2 - That way we get notified and don't end up accidently missing an updated chapter before reading the next one😄😉👍.

    -Momentie 😊👍

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