Jul 18, 2022
Hmmmmm, my thoughts are growing more muddled on this whole thing as it progresses - That's not necessarily bad or anything, perhaps it's the sense that we've passed a certain point here?
Up until now the mark of the plot was a fairly simple 'will they, won't they' with a grand total of 5 named characters, only 4 of which we've actually met face to face.
Now we've succeeded in that basic goal and I guess it feels a little 'at sea' - Again this is probably just becuase I'm reading these as you put them out but I thought I'd say it;
As an audience member right now it's a bit hard to tell what the point is if that makes sense - Is this the start of a harem with the large additions of the so far somewhat superfluous Chika and more important voice of the phone, Sakura.
Is this a romance story that goes beyond the basic cute-meet with aspirations of showing lots of the relationship.
Is this just about discovering Koi's rapidly growing mountain of secrets.
Or is this all just a modern Ms.Dalaway told from an otaku's perspective.
Cause see the book opens with a pretty narrow field of view, if this is gonna branch into a harem, then it feels a tad sudden - Not alot but a bit.
Alternately if this is meant to remain just a book about Koi and our Boi, with the others just being the friends we made along the way - Then some of the signaling feels a little off.
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Again it's a small thing and it may immediately be made clear in a chapter or two but there ya go.
Oh and hope you're feeling a bit better now too😊👍.
