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Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Jul 19, 2022

To:Liber Mercury

Nope, whatever order you like is fine😎.

Chronologically it goes;
-'The Tales From The UnderCurrent V1+ V2'
- 'UnderCurrent'
- 'Mechanical Girl Una.'
- 'The Girl He Used To Know.'
- 'UnderCurrent 2.'

But they're all intended as standalone - The short stories are probs the best start being short but any you choose to read will make me happy, thanks a bunch for your interest😊😄

Former Exclusive Home of 'UnderCurrent - Can You Break The Cycle' - Now available of Royal-Road and Scribble-Hub

Chapter:0

Jul 19, 2022

That was intense put lightly😂 - And I thought the last chapter had atmostphere!

The sexual undertones are glorius, you really brillaintly make them feel uncomfortable while still being fanservice - I can only think of a handful of things that pull that off.
School days, Shuffle and Ryvious come to mind - But ya it ain't a common thing to achieve so kudos.

And speaking of uncomfortable, the sinking ambience of dread the more she talks and the more you learn about the people's and ideas she become acquainted with - That moment of absolute hypocracy + Irony when she says they never push anyone, yet they celebrate and glorify death.

Ya man, this is some good shit - Great going💪👍.

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:12

Jul 18, 2022

To:AkuaSenpai

Sure thing - I'll look foward to it as always😄😊

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:33

Jul 18, 2022

Hmmmmm, my thoughts are growing more muddled on this whole thing as it progresses - That's not necessarily bad or anything, perhaps it's the sense that we've passed a certain point here?

Up until now the mark of the plot was a fairly simple 'will they, won't they' with a grand total of 5 named characters, only 4 of which we've actually met face to face.
Now we've succeeded in that basic goal and I guess it feels a little 'at sea' - Again this is probably just becuase I'm reading these as you put them out but I thought I'd say it;

As an audience member right now it's a bit hard to tell what the point is if that makes sense - Is this the start of a harem with the large additions of the so far somewhat superfluous Chika and more important voice of the phone, Sakura.
Is this a romance story that goes beyond the basic cute-meet with aspirations of showing lots of the relationship.
Is this just about discovering Koi's rapidly growing mountain of secrets.
Or is this all just a modern Ms.Dalaway told from an otaku's perspective.

Cause see the book opens with a pretty narrow field of view, if this is gonna branch into a harem, then it feels a tad sudden - Not alot but a bit.
Alternately if this is meant to remain just a book about Koi and our Boi, with the others just being the friends we made along the way - Then some of the signaling feels a little off.

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Again it's a small thing and it may immediately be made clear in a chapter or two but there ya go.

Oh and hope you're feeling a bit better now too😊👍.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:33

Jul 18, 2022

Dang Koi be kinda stalker at this point in the confession process😅😅

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:31

Jul 17, 2022

I like the one week skip, nice way to get into things a bit quicker😎👍

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:5

Jul 17, 2022

It's only been a week? Dang, long week😅😅.

Also, furbolt gotta up his game - My cat catches butterfly's easily😂😎😉

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Jokes aside, really strong chapter, got a nice sense of meloncoly to it, whole lot of intrigue building up here too

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:11

Jul 16, 2022

Dang last chapter was very violent, sounds like the trip will be too🤔😅.

Also Butgami is a bit thick in the head😅, he should of seen the bath scene coming😉😂

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:7

Jul 16, 2022

Meh I'm mixed on this chapter - The combat is told fairly clearly but the tags are pretty bad - With it being all girls, on a couple occasions you use 'her' 2-3 times in a row, making it hard to tell 'which her' you mean.

Someone also does some sort of magic in the middle? That's just impossible to visualise with our current context😅.

Other then that, I like Rel, nice impactful introduction 💪😂

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:9

Jul 15, 2022

Eh best girl returns, and eh.... That's quite the power😉🤔😂

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:153

Jul 15, 2022

Nice to see the mighty bentoulous military training program paying off💪💪💪💪.

Kinda surprised to see Gywn braging so openly tho - Bad for the whole stealth thing😂

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:152

Jul 14, 2022

Isis seems interesting - Lots of characters to follow😊👍

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:6

Jul 13, 2022

I like it, a nice chill chapter before shit hits the fan, my kind of pacing😎😄

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:10

Jul 12, 2022

To:epicene

The bubbly air head protag from the countryside and the quartet of girls per dorm on an original set of 4 ( 5 in your case) major islands - Sometimes or influences take control without us even knowing it😂.

I write mecha, everything i try has 100% already been done - Don't worry about it too much, just keep putting your own flare on it😎😉👍

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:5

Jul 12, 2022

Huh, so like RWBY but with a rigid social hierarchy - Certainly an interesting chapter

Y: The Tides Are In Our Hearts

Chapter:5