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Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Jun 03, 2022

Hey, good to see you posting again Aqua!😄

And a great first chapter for your return - Love the slow explaination of daily life, I can see a K-on S1 moment in a future chapter where our Boi's development might be mapped by mirroring this further down the line😁😉.

Also it reminds me of how glad I am that I quit seasonal anime a long time ago and never got into V-tubers😂😂.

Looking forward to more😄😊👍.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:1

Jun 03, 2022

Nah, that's a surprisingly cute concept, I can image all the moe expressions too😂 - Seems like this'll be fun😄😊👍.

Emoji Love

Chapter:1

May 31, 2022

To:EliteWarrior910

Nice catch! 😂😄

And thanks, it's awesome to hear you're liking his character and that it feels relatable to something from your own life - Thanks for reading😁😁.

The Girl He Used To Know - Original HoneyFeed Version

Chapter:13

May 30, 2022

Eh nice one - Reminds me of that whole thing about how most of us take better care of our dogs/cats then we do ourselves.
(Don't have the numbers on hands but in America you're more likely to properly mind your dog's health and fill it's prescriptions when it's I'll, then you are your own😅😭).

I like the added Otaku twist of the figurine, very nice😎👍

Short Story and Poetry Collection

Chapter:6

May 27, 2022

Yay! I caught up😎👍.

Not too much to say yet as we're obviously still in the early days of this novel but a few bits;

I like the premise, not the death bit, that's normal enough - But rather the 10 rings = 10 catgirl 'beasts' - I think it could turn out really hilarious if she's actually not the chosen one and really is just using the profahcy as an excuse😂😂.

I also quite like the small chapter lengths, they feel fun and colourful.

All that said I do wonder about the longevity of the piece - You've got a bit of a Konosuba vibe going right now, fun jokes & building up character interactions - However sooner or later 'stuff' has to happen if you want to reach your full potential - A conflict of some sort will be needed, a hero moment for our protag, etc.

Right now I think you could do with laying a little more groundwork for those things, just a few breadcrumbs here and there - I always use Konosuba as the example becuase of the stark difference between s1 & s2 - S1 is great becuase it's funny But the gang do still have the odd cool or wholesome moment every 6 EPs or so, which is what grounds the comedy and makes the gang feel like believable friends who are fun to watch joke around - S2 is just the same jokes over and over, to the point I came to dislike the gang I had loved so much initally.

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So ya, still very early days but I think you've got a great premise, fun jokes and a nice atmostphere - Just be careful if you want this book to reach its full potential 😊😊👍👍.

I Die Crushed by Catgirl Pillows, Yet My Total And All-Consuming Love for Catgirls was Rewarded and I am Reborn In Another World, as a Princess! Then I Find Out My New World Has Catgirls, So I Will Aim to Create a Harem With All the Catgirls in The World!

Chapter:8

May 26, 2022

Ehh wait a minute - If she's a catgirl and her sister's a catgirl.... Then isn't one of the 10 beasts gonna be.... Her mother!?!?

Chapter:3

May 26, 2022

Whew, your getting through my book so fast, I just had to return the favour a bit😍😎.

I'm liking the comedy so far, the one liners in particular are where it's at;
'I never joke when it comes to catgirls!!'😂😅😂😅

Chapter:2

May 25, 2022

Damn-son that dragon thing gave him a real run for his money!

Also I like the village, it reminds of the types of location they visit in shows like Kino's Journey and Gosick😊😄.

The Town Where the Wind Doesn't Blow: Breim Village (Story Arc #03 )

Chapter:4

May 25, 2022

So what I find really interesting with this volume is it's comfy feeling - It feels authentic to me.

I intended to be done and into volume 2 by now but some family stuff came up and I dipped out for like a nearly a week - And yet upon returning this afternoon I was able to slid straight back in like a comfy armchair😄.

I've certainly enjoyed this a whole lot like I mentioned in my prior comment - It isn't necessarily always mind blowing per se, but its all really solidly done and like I said, feels authentic.

I've got some other novels to catch up on and that family thing is a pain lol, but I'll happily return in the coming weeks and am genuinely excited to see where this goes as we move past the tutorial world and into further fields😉😊😄.

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Oh and just saying now but the minister for defence guy with the world's strongest familiar - He is definitely the robbed villian' - That's ma' bet anyway😂😂😂😂😅😅😅😅.
Cya in volume 2!😊😄

Atk 0 Crit All ~My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical hits to succeed!~

Chapter:30

May 25, 2022

God damn my friend, god damn.

There's a lot here to unpack these last few chapters but I should probs read a few more volumes before going overboard😂😅.

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I will say that I love the simple and elegant form of the arc - It's predictable sure but in a very comfortable way.
Claude becoming more OP through hard work is nice by itself - But by having his weakness be his self-esteem, you essientially make him vulnerable no matter how strong he gets - Which I just really love.

You also avoid the old iseaki troop of 'Shit person is fixed by being in another world' - It's not the world that fixed Claude, but rather his willingness to put in an effort this time and the support of the good people around him.

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Absolutely love it, the imagery of the battle is also really strong, I very much so enjoyed it greatly😊👍.

Atk 0 Crit All ~My attack stat is negligible, so I can't help but rely on critical hits to succeed!~

Chapter:29

May 25, 2022

Hey there, saw you had a look at my book - Thanks I hope you're enjoying it!😄😄

Saw your own book's premise and awesome cover art - Defo gonna add this to my reading list soon😁😊👍.

Chapter:1

May 25, 2022

😂I'm waiting for a volume hundreds of chapters down the line where these three will safe the day once a for all😅😄.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:131

May 19, 2022

I joked about it in my last comment, but I wouldn't be surprised if these girls suddenly summoned a mecha😂, this beaudideal business is super intense it seems😄😁.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:129

May 19, 2022

Heya👋.

I think it's really good your leaving it up, we're all constantly getting better at this so we can always rewrite - I know personally I'm often tempted to stop progress and just go back to editing the earlier parts of my books but I think your choice is a good one, getting that first draft done will feel great and the longer it's online, the more feedback you'll hopefully get along the way😄😊 - When you do get to that second and third draft, I'm sure you'll be glad you finished the first!😄😉.

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Good luck with the competition - There's a lot of people I read doing it, so I hope I can keep up with reading you all😂😂 - June's gonna be busy😅😅.

My Life Is Already Bad...I Don't Need A Cat-Girl Making It Worse!!

Chapter:12

May 19, 2022

To:Deleted User

Hey man, go and watch original Macross - The idol genre is quite literally a sub-genre of mecha😂😂😂😂😉😉

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:127