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Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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May 15, 2022

Ho-ho, my hopes for more interactions a few chapters ago have been answered in style - I'm loving Rheba and Harlon both secretly loving idols😂😂 and the descriptions in this and the last chapter were great as always 😊😎👍

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:127

May 15, 2022

To:kazesenken

😂😂, the subconscious is a powerful weapon no doubt 😁😉😂

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Ya laws of iseaki is always a good call😉😂😂😂

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Chapter:11

May 14, 2022

#2 - I do have one last question tho.... Where does the water go?

Like sure short term it's not a big issue, but like, over hundreds of years do sea levels rise from ice & water mages magically generating H2O?😅😂😎

I swear, 'Now & then, here & there' is like the only story I've ever seen fully address the potential inadvertent natural disators a water mage could be commuting😂😂

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Chapter:11

May 14, 2022

Ho-damn, we were just chilling in light hearted adventures land when we stumble across this treasure chest of glory!

While this seems like a simple chapter on the surface, I love what it's signaling.

First off... We here in Europe can drink at 18 lol, and I can vouche that as someone who can go 9 rounds, that makes me the lightweight in most rooms - What can I say, us Irish just drink different to these anime girls😂😂.

Ahem, right - So first the super natural set up, this is a very believable place to do a flashback and alcohol makes all revealing of info valid - A good move well made.

Second, I always love simple but effective characterisation early into a book - In one move you shatter the illusion that Cornelius might be a sketchy bloke/you very much so position him as an ally going foward, establish a strong & believable bond between him and Eryn, but also a budding kinship between our Earl & Chef, And even manage to get in some backstories plus the nice touch of using his artistry to allagory his relationship to his parents and society - Nicely and quite subtlety linking back to Chef-Boi's own issues with societal expectations.

And all set in a pub! My favourite kind of setting, high end or not!😂

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There's also plenty more potential plot hooks in here as has become customary over these early chapters (Which indicates good things in the long run me hopes😎😉) and most of all? This is just a downright charming chapter (and novel on general).

The characters feel natural, the story is light and brezzy in a sort of Hobbiton fashion - Things are moving steady and it's a whole lot of fun - I honestly find myself constantly coming back for more, send my compliments to the chef as it were😉😊👍.

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Chapter:11

May 14, 2022

To:flameball918

My highschool ag-science years were all worth it after all!😂😂

An Experimental Collection of The Absurd

Chapter:0

May 14, 2022

Your work never stops being different😅 - Tho I have a contradiction your honour!?!
Plants don't require food, but they are living organisms😉😂 - peace out lol.

An Experimental Collection of The Absurd

Chapter:0

May 14, 2022

I'd like to recommend that all who read this chapter should imagine the hogs from Gurren Lagann😂, I can totally see them getting duped in this fashion for the sake of some food😂😉.

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Chapter:8

May 14, 2022

Nice addition, gotta say it sounds like it'd be a pretty bad ass way to draw out a kitchen knife😁😂 - Also seems like a nice potential for set-up, I'm goin' place my bets for some form of teleportation gadget or principal being vital to a boss battle later down the line or something😂😆😋😉.

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Chapter:7

May 13, 2022

K thoughts 😄👍;

Our boi is surprisingly capable for what seemed to be a hikikmori - Not that that's an issue, but rather make me more interested😁.
From what I can tell so far, he helped out his parents till just a year or so ago - Finding out what brought on this change in how he thinks, wheather it be going to collage or something more (ala his monologue in chapter 1) should be really interesting, so nice hook right there😊👍.

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The setting is a little more basic this far but I see no problem with that - Isekai worlds that are more 'Earth' in nature tend to be more about the characters and adventure, which me likes - Though so far this one seems particularly nice, he can read, knows all the food, speaks the language, has modern convinces - Man I wouldn't mind living there myself😅😂😁.

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Combat so far is also nice and clean - No overly complicated or hard to follow attacks, just well described actions - The rolling arc after the faint raffish attack in particular made me chuckle 😄😂.
The finding the weak point in the raddish brought me some serious nostalgia for the Grimgar light novels, so plus points there too😉😄.

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Ya all round alot of fun, I know I'm still in the earliest part, but I'm already enjoying it - Looking foward to more!😊

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Chapter:4

May 12, 2022

You weren't lying about this being a loveletter to anime, I spotted atleast three possible references/homages/inspirations in the way he got isekaied and his stats alone😂😁 - I got a feeling I'm gonna enjoy this😎.

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Chapter:1

May 12, 2022

Ahhhhhh man, there ain't no way I'll ever catch up lol, but what can I say, I've really liked your stuff so far and I know my isekais pretty well, so here we go lol, 300-odd chapters to go!😂😊👍

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Chapter:0

May 12, 2022

Sorry for your loss bud, hope you are well👍

Another Day in the Life of Me

Chapter:125

May 11, 2022

To:Ochroleucous

Ah I see, like when the Brits used to use the same sort of civilian landrover for military recon missions😎👍.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:125

May 11, 2022

Years of anime making the change from summer uniform to winter uniform a big deal has conditioned me greatly😂 - So what can I say, I always like a good custom change😁😂.

That said, it's only really dawned on me now but is the Ali not a bit suspicious? Like if they're just gonna drive right into this place, isn't a military vehicles from another nation a bit conspicuous 😅😅.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:125

May 10, 2022

To:Ochroleucous

Oh-ho, well you know me, I love joining short stories to bigger stories, am all for that😂😂.

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I'm really digging the appendix thingy at the end with all the insignias and trivia, it's a really cool touch that you don't get with the webnovel - I love me trivia 😄😁.

Short Story and Poetry Collection

Chapter:2