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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Currently writing "My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!" Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jun 12, 2022
I get the feeling being able to play music during your story would be nice lol Would love to have my own readers hear the banger stuff I'm listening to while writing xD
"Now playing love is a crime by Parademero" Oh, you make your own songs or something?
To:Tomoyuki
Oh Keiko has potential to turn into a lot of things xD Next chapter will unleash her true powers ~ And the loli tsundere will be a reoccurring character and might be important later on hehe
Oh nice, I like little fun fact chapters like this If I was writing my isekai I might do something simiarl ahaha
To:FumoDrawer_95
Tsundere lolis are like the face of romcom anime so had to include one xD Always fun to write too Oof. next chapter Keiko is going to show her true form 🤣
Actually pretty good use of present tense, and good for not mixing it with past tense. Lots of people tend to mix the two.
Shorter chapter, but still conveyed things. I think that was a matrix reference at the end.
Grammar is a bit off, but I like what you have, and there's not much info dumping which is good.
Jun 11, 2022
To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi
His only social circle is pretty just much just his coworkers lol But I'm surprised you point that out more than all the nihilism in this chapter? The nihilism is part of the reason he has difficulty socializing with others.
He's horny and depressed, basically like the MC of Welcome to the NHK. I'm mostly just leaning into the horny right now because not many probably wanna read about depression so early on
"Build-your-Burger" I need me something like that nearby haha Poor Mary, kind of feel bad Sam was being so mean to her Oh well, my friends are kind of mean to me too xD
Oh hey Tomo, thanks again for reading and giving advice early on. Yeah I'm attempting to foreshadow certain things and leave the window open for others. Not exactly going for the standard romcom-feeling series which might be more apparent in the next chapter 😅
To:Momentie
Wow, thanks a bunch for the detailed comment and insights! Yeah don't worry, this chapter was about as ecchi as it'll get and there won't be a harem. Was getting kind of tired of the usual romcoms so decided to give my own take on the genre with this story ahaha Hopefully I can keep up the pace since I'm lagging behind on writing 😅New chapter tomorrow though!
"She wasn't even sure she smelled anything at all!" Covid positive confirmed haha But yeah, cute encounter with the two girls bumping into each other And I always appreciate an omniscient narrator UwU
Jun 10, 2022
To:Saito Forester
His struggle is def gonna be real in the future haha xD