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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing "Reincarnated as a Background Character".
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Jun 14, 2022
Hmm wonder where the story goes from here
Oh nice, think I've seen you around the discord; always nice seeing familiar names But yeah, intriguing start, but I feel like it could use more of a hook somewhere Like the cover too :)
To:sageash
Sup Good luck in the contest bro, hope you do well
Dang, that interrogation was pretty brutal lol; I dig it And phew lad, first person present tense is intense! As in I have no talent for it haha; can barely handle first person past tense myself. Liked the bit of cheeky 2nd person there towards the end too
Prose is a little stiff but love the cover 😍 Best wishes!
Love the lovely girls on the cover~ Prose in the chapter reads a little stiff, but not bad. Keep at it.
Bit of improvements from when I beta read it, but yeah still a bit rough Practice makes perfect though so keep at it 😀
Woah, quite the cutie on the cover 😘 Almost as cute as the girl on mine hehe
Story reads alright, but it's in a script format which I'm not the biggest fan of. Hope you do well though!
Props on doing the cover and story yourself, pretty rare to be both author and artist
Cool, looks like the Matterhorn in your cover's background A martial arts story is cool too, keep at it
Aesthetic cover bro
Nice, love the high concept premise of an adult being forced to attend a foreign high school Be interesting to see where it goes
Adopting an introvert, nice, I like the premise. Only issue is this read more like a script than a novel, but I'm sure there's others who would appreciate the style more
To:Parademero
We just gotta work hard to get an anime of our stories someday! Get some cool tunes, especially in the OP 😆 Totally not because I suck at writing music in my stories or anything xD
Nice, would be dope if we could play songs over our novels, huh? I'd show readers some of the crazy stuff I listen to while writing ahaha
