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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Currently writing "My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!" Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jun 04, 2022
Mmmm yes forgot to mention how much I love third person lol But since it's third person, I think you can afford to say "she" or "her" more often than Sam, since you're kinda repeating Sam often But other than that yeah, cute chapter.
Kinda iffy on the message format, but if it's just this chapter it's all good Funny how both our first paragraphs emphasized the word "this" ahaha
To:Swanny
Yay, happy to hear you're invested in them already! Their relationship grows quickly so I hope you stick around <3
To:Deleted User
Well she's a mooch-in-training lol But she'll show more of her cuter side over time For now, she's just gonna act like she owns the place ahaha Thanks for reading though!
To:Fuzzy Rabid Usagi
If you wanna stick around, pretty much all your questions get answered in the next chapter :) But thanks for checking out this first chapter at least!
To:Momentie
Thank you so much for giving me a try! I tried making Asagiri (the heroine) try to seem as real sounding as possible, so I hope readers end up liking her in the long run lol There will be other girls though competing for everyone's hearts though xD
Jun 01, 2022
Hmmmm wonder where this story is gonna go Have mixed feelings but overall pretty good Akane and Nari hmmm, deciding which will be waifu UwU And sounding like something big might be happening next chapter, nice
Mar 20, 2022
It's jarring reading a story with one of its main characters having the same name as one of your own main characters haha. Quite spooky actually, the other MC here (Riku) was what I also almost named my MC (Daichi). Small world. Fun read though.
Feb 27, 2022
Based emphasis on lots of thighs and fish-nets. Really liked the fight with Emyria and Aysteria; had good unique descriptions. Undertaker was pretty cool too, and feels like they work for a pretty brutal government. Hope you stick around to write more good stories! I'm hoping to get my own out soon.
Woah, quite the good action scene. A few syntax errors here and there but overall, much better than what I'm used to. I know you said you don't like writing, but maybe it wouldn't hurt to lean a bit more into the hobby.
