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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Currently writing "My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!" Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jun 10, 2022
Short and sweet prologue. Jesus there was some nice vibes when I read those first paragraphs while hearing Chopin on a guitar. On to read the next chapter ~
Jun 09, 2022
To:epicene
Hehe, Asagiri is a bit of everything that's for sure 😅 And thanks for your continued interest! Gonna try to get the third chapter out on Saturday
Cougar moment Liking the dialogue so far
I like the name "Pollux", gives me like pollen meshed with cyberpunk vibes. No major problems, apart from mixing past and present tense sometimes. I also recommend trying to start and end your chapters with hooks. Anyways, keep up the good work
Ahhh a bit of an infodump, but interesting read none the less
To:znf
Dang yeah, can't win them all. I do like foreshadowing since that's a big part of my writing style. But thanks for checking me out!
Hey sorry for the late reply, but thanks again for the high praise! I was aiming for light novel vibes so this makes me feel super proud of myself :) Hopefully I can keep it up until the end!
To:Albion K. D. Kuki
Thank you so much for the kind words! I love snarky characters, so it only made sense to make one the star of this romcom novel xD Happy it sounds like I did the archetype justice <3 But yeah don't worry, there will definitely be new elements to keep the story fresh, especially with reoccurring themes that will begin in the next chapter.
Jun 07, 2022
To:Yairy
OwO Don't worry, I checked if language and raunchy humor was ok. Thanks for seeing the cuteness in Asagiri <3 I think my artist did a fantastic job with her; even went through the trouble of reading my first chapters to get a better idea of her. But rest assured, I'll always make sure Asagiri's cuteness is always at the forefront :) With some interesting plot developments later on.
To:Dope
Thank yee <3 And thanks for being with me on this journey!
Jun 06, 2022
My brain keeps trying to pronounce Feodora as "Fedora" lol Cool chapter Bit odd centering text sometimes but whatever
To:writingoreo
Thinking about giving the cat a cute redemption arc xD
Jun 05, 2022
To:Bubbles
Thanks for the insight :) I appreciate it. I’m aiming for hyperbolic humor, but mostly so it gets juxtaposed against more nuanced themes later on. There will be various different tones throughout the story so I hope I can keep you interested <3
How to make the girl on the cover my waifu??
To:tanktrilby
Hehe, I wanted her to pose with a cat on the cover for a reason <3