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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing GLINT. Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jun 14, 2022
Woah, love the aesthetic of the cover, really eye catching!
Kinda iffy about starting with info dumps, but the introspection was pretty good though
The syntax was a tad rough, but I loved the premise so I'll see if I stick around <3
Cute chapter 😀
Haha, "sexnique" and sperm-shaped spaceships; loving the creativity here And I thought my novel was horny xD
Oh, deer girls, based lol
Nice, liked how the synopsis itself had a bit of a plot twist
Hmm wonder where the story goes from here
Oh nice, think I've seen you around the discord; always nice seeing familiar names But yeah, intriguing start, but I feel like it could use more of a hook somewhere Like the cover too :)
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Sup Good luck in the contest bro, hope you do well
Dang, that interrogation was pretty brutal lol; I dig it And phew lad, first person present tense is intense! As in I have no talent for it haha; can barely handle first person past tense myself. Liked the bit of cheeky 2nd person there towards the end too
Prose is a little stiff but love the cover 😍 Best wishes!
Love the lovely girls on the cover~ Prose in the chapter reads a little stiff, but not bad. Keep at it.
Bit of improvements from when I beta read it, but yeah still a bit rough Practice makes perfect though so keep at it 😀
Woah, quite the cutie on the cover 😘 Almost as cute as the girl on mine hehe
Story reads alright, but it's in a script format which I'm not the biggest fan of. Hope you do well though!
