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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing GLINT. Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jun 13, 2022
Love the enthusiasm of the tour guide
Love this kind of concept, especially with darker upcoming themes
I wanna take part in Darren Chong memes 😩 Gonna try to read more GEP soon A lot of "Doggy" here too, maybe a kink?
I feel like they say their names a bit too often in dialogue, but the convos are still fun and easy to keep up with.
Other than that, Nari gang 😆
Love me some good rainy scenes Lots of tagless dialogue too but it makes sense since it's obvious who's speaking Keep up the good work
This chapter made me realize we have a similar writing style lol I like how you don't use many dialogue tags and opt to use action tags when possible. Also, "barklight" kind of makes me think a dog 😅
Nice, action flowed pretty smoothly. Liked some of the quotes too
Jun 12, 2022
To:Shirota
Ooo I actually liked Toradora, so maybe some other things will be similar ~ Loli tsunderes leave a lot of room to develop them <3
I get the feeling being able to play music during your story would be nice lol Would love to have my own readers hear the banger stuff I'm listening to while writing xD
"Now playing love is a crime by Parademero" Oh, you make your own songs or something?
To:Deleted User
Oh Keiko has potential to turn into a lot of things xD Next chapter will unleash her true powers ~ And the loli tsundere will be a reoccurring character and might be important later on hehe
Oh nice, I like little fun fact chapters like this If I was writing my isekai I might do something simiarl ahaha
To:FumoDrawer_95
Tsundere lolis are like the face of romcom anime so had to include one xD Always fun to write too Oof. next chapter Keiko is going to show her true form 🤣
Actually pretty good use of present tense, and good for not mixing it with past tense. Lots of people tend to mix the two.
Shorter chapter, but still conveyed things. I think that was a matrix reference at the end.
