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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Currently writing "My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!" Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jun 13, 2022
Bruh love the concept. Had a tamagotchi when I was a kid too Dang creature always died on me haha
Cute girl on the cover, reminds me a bit of Marin
oo boy, naming your first chapter "my first time" is bound to turn some eye brows😱
This is truly the peak of human evolution
TIme traveling school story huh? Should be interesting. Gives off good vibes right off the bat.
Love the enthusiasm of the tour guide
Love this kind of concept, especially with darker upcoming themes
Pretty good prose here, and I liked how the interviewer seemed to have an actual personality
I usually don't like prologues but this one was pretty good. Liked the dynamic movement during explosions too I'll be around ~
I wanna take part in Darren Chong memes 😩 Gonna try to read more GEP soon A lot of "Doggy" here too, maybe a kink?
I feel like they say their names a bit too often in dialogue, but the convos are still fun and easy to keep up with.
Other than that, Nari gang 😆
Love me some good rainy scenes Lots of tagless dialogue too but it makes sense since it's obvious who's speaking Keep up the good work
This chapter made me realize we have a similar writing style lol I like how you don't use many dialogue tags and opt to use action tags when possible. Also, "barklight" kind of makes me think a dog 😅
Nice, action flowed pretty smoothly. Liked some of the quotes too
Jun 12, 2022
To:Shirota
Ooo I actually liked Toradora, so maybe some other things will be similar ~ Loli tsunderes leave a lot of room to develop them <3