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He/They | Writer and Artist Writing "Pigeon on a Power Line" for the Mal X Honeyfeed 2023 Contest Finalist in the 2022 Contest with, "Are You Real?" Pfp Art by Pit, @pawkaray on twitter
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Jul 22, 2022
Love the twist that he challenges her to a duel, tells me that their dynamic is going to be a wild ride haha
The narration depicts a beautiful rendition of 19th century Italy, I only wish the chapter was longer
Unabashedly horny plus apex legends reference, very based
Jul 18, 2022
To:Ravenwing
Thank you for the praise and the constructive criticism! Please don't hold back with more, I love to hear from more perspectives on my work! ❤️
To:Jungleevilshadow
Glad you liked the blazing-fast pacing~ Also, it's interesting you see Ai like *that*. I won't say anything more at risk of spoilers, but I'd like to see more of your thoughts as you read on <3 Thanks for reading!
To:hoplessauthor
Only time will tell. Perhaps she was a fan of Dimension Invaders 1~
To:Deleted User
Very clever, Tomo, I see what you did there 😉
Jul 17, 2022
To:Pelinal Whitestrake
DEAR GOD THE ASCIII ART HAHA- And yeah, technically it's stalking, but nothing's illegal if you don't get caught 😎 (Don't try this at home kids)
Gotta love the wholesome boomer dads and their "back in my days" stories~ Jokes aside, thank you for your readership 🙇 <3
Jul 16, 2022
Interesting, so it's sort of a puzzle-school setup. Wondering what kind of plan exactly Tetsuo has in mind to survive the year~
Jul 15, 2022
To:KEWPIEMEAYO
Awww, thank you so much for the comment~ glad you find the perspective change both functional and instructive ^-^
Yep, so glad you're seeing where I was going with the slow name-transitioning ^-^
🙏😇 Also, there will always be feed for the faithful 🐶✏️ & 🐟✏️
I do see your point about the exposition, though I feel that it's important to quickly establish a lot of stuff early on with this story, because it will be a bit *too much* of a slow burn otherwise. I'm really glad you have a lot of unanswered questions though, for the same reasons I mentioned in my reply to Alyssa. Thank you for taking the time to read, hopefully you stick around ^-^!
LITERALLY THE WORST THING FOR HIM TO LOSE IN THE RAIN! 😭
To:Kya Hon
Oops- forgot to add this Alyssa, but I sincerely appreciate your readership ^-^ Hopefully you'll stick around and pass along some more thoughts on the matter, but no pressure otherwise. I really appreciate you taking a look either way. Thank you so much for the detailed feedback! ❤️
