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Short story guy forced to write long ones.
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Jul 30, 2023
I suggest getting a quick skim through chapter 11 and the later half of chapter 12. Would help clear up some question and build emotion.
Dang, I totally forgot about the obnoxious prince lol. Looked like he doesn't just want to be a one-time side villain.
Working in an office job, albeit having authority or not, must have bored him out. So I guess it's no wonder why he wants to return lol.
Even his sister believes that Shoutaro trusts Hanako. So I think the couple won't have to wait until the end of time for the boy to start trusting the demon.
To:dmz
Gotta do the traditional way once in a while lol.
Always nice to see that the nerd got it wrong, luck did matter.
Kyle can speak now, hmm, I wonder what Diane meant by "unstoppable".
Jul 29, 2023
"If you can't make a woman fall for you, at least indulge in her fetish." - Kousuke after this probably.
Saintess Slavia resembles a lot like Illya from Fate lol. Sad that Hal probably won't have a long future with her, unless the future can be changed 🤔
I don't think it's likely for someone who's that passionate about something to merely turn out that it's a disguise lol. Haru got tricked hard by Megu, best girl-boy fr.
This is kind of reminding me of Haru and Kasumi's first date lol, with Haru's head always being in the cloud. Though I wouldn't say it's the same, it just shows how Haru's perspective have shifted.
Jul 28, 2023
I actually had to go back and add narration into the chap once before lol. The paragraph right after the first dialogue indicates it without any metaphor: “looks like i got punched so hard my brain sent me back to my middle school days.“
To:Christian Widjaya
just a fast forward into John's perspective lol. I felt like there wasn't a need to write the exposition and so just left it at that.
I kept it subtle because the details of what Stan and Kiri was about to do was also a mystery lol. I'll just say that John is in the bathroom right now.
The love for their homies that these dudes have. Looks like Brandon have a love story of his own, and his boy Tony is all for it.
