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KawaZukiYama

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Loves K drama, manga and Tintin.

registered at: Jun 17, 2022

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Jul 26, 2022

Enjoyed this :)

The Keeper

Chapter:2

Jul 26, 2022

To:Sen Kumo

Please do, feel free to comment too if you get time, I’d love to hear your thoughts. Will keep an eye on yours :D

Solipsys

Chapter:2

Jul 26, 2022

I saw your post on the discord so thought I'd read and comment. :) Been doing sooo much reading here. I've only read the first few chapters but pressed the wrong link but it's really nice light tone compared to what I'm writing. Good work :) if you feel like dinner feedback on mine that would be great to hear. Im the same as your supportive stuff is helpful

Good Luck in the Golden Classroom: The Golden Waltz

Chapter:27

Jul 26, 2022

I like the use of Korea as a massive k drama/culture fan :)

The Living Apocalypse

Chapter:0

Jul 26, 2022

Moi aussi!

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:14

Jul 26, 2022

I’m just enjoying immersing myself in cyberpunk as it’s the theme of my novel—good work :)

I Woke Up In A Different World, But Not The World I Was Expecting!

Chapter:0

Jul 26, 2022

This made me think of gintama :)

The world's last samurai in a technological era

Chapter:0

Jul 26, 2022

Evangelion lover too. Our novels have a similar setting. Hope you continue this :)

Neo Tokyo's Empty Shells

Chapter:1

Jul 26, 2022

It’s cool. Others felt differently, which is the good thing about subjectivity, something for everyone. :) As a side note, it’s always best imo to use terminology specific to your world without reticence and understood contextually rather than explicitly defined.. because that’s how we speak about things natural to us and it makes the world consistent to itself. We wouldn’t bother explaining what a toaster is, even if it was a new concept to an unseen alien viewing our conversation. And they may not immediately understand but would pick it up in time, or if they don’t it’s not terribly important, just the general gist of it, but most important of all is protecting the realism of the world. The opposite is when something’s an info dump, which I see a lot (example: ‘hi Jason.’ ‘Oh hi princess eve, so good to see you so recently after we vanquished the dark Lord in the Great War of aldebaraan.’ ‘Uhhh..yeah, weird that youre mentioning it seeing as I was there and it was like yesterday. Are you ok?.’.. checks for wiretap)

Tokyo5: Prosper’s Law

Chapter:1

Jul 26, 2022

To:RafuuGene

I’m happy for you because I know that feeling so well

The Leigh Theory

Chapter:15

Jul 26, 2022

To:RafuuGene

I really know what you mean, mine is something I had the beginnings of for a while but it took the competition to nudge me into writing it :)

The Leigh Theory

Chapter:15

Jul 26, 2022

To:TaigataroHONEYFEED

Thanks! That would be great! Feel free to comment or anything if you enjoy it. I’m going to be working a lot harder and putting out more chapters this month

Kaiju Boom!

Chapter:3

Jul 26, 2022

To:freezedriedstrahd

I’ll keep an eye out for updates.

NekoPunk

Chapter:19

Jul 26, 2022

To:LinYang

Thanks so much! Feel free to comment or anything - i just hope you enjoy it and I’ll check for yours :D

The Artificial Lights of R'veno

Chapter:16

Jul 26, 2022

To:Armonia

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it. :D And it’s very rewarding that you’re enjoying it. I’ll be writing a lot more regularly now and updating

Tokyo5: Prosper’s Law

Chapter:0

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