Aug 05, 2022
To:Deleted User
Hi. Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to give such detailed feedback! I really appreciate it.:) i hope you enjoy the rest of the story. I have read through each of your points and I feel that they are matters of preference. Notions of rules in writing just don’t work blanket fashion or as absolutes. Some readers understood the things you found troublesome without a problem, and others found other things, some people prefer things implied, some more explicit etc. I do really really appreciate your comment though, and i will have another look later because sometimes you see something differently when you have another look. :) Thanks again! I’m going to be doing a lot of work on it and updating every day or two this month so i hope you and others enjoy where it goes. The writing may have to sacrifice some detail for some motion though.
