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I usually read back as a courtesy but if you're gonna read JUST so I return the favor, heed my warning: I won't.

apparently my writing style is too avant-garde for the weebs or some shit but if you ask me that's just a polite way to tell me I have terminal skill issue

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Jan 19, 2025

arwain ik ur a himbo but this is too much

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Chapter:25

Jan 18, 2025

this is my favorite chapter so far
it's cozy
also cows getting suplexed and more unsubtle allegory-ing

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Chapter:22

Jan 18, 2025

To:Kitsune

You can't sit with us.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:6

Jan 18, 2025

I like that ACTIONS HAVE CONSEQUENCES(TM) because aside from mooks suffering, the main cast has kind of had it too easy
sorry jake ur not a mc ur glutes aren't bulbous enough

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Chapter:21

Jan 18, 2025

S U B T L E.

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Chapter:20

Jan 18, 2025

arwain is an objekt and proud of it
extremely based

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Chapter:18

Jan 18, 2025

awe arwain
no wonder he feels guilty about his mom
not that he could prevent what happened but he sure could've made it easier
Youth(TM)

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Chapter:17

Jan 18, 2025

a future where everyone is jacked and you can have wings do be Harmonic
Wall-E crisis averted (i got so phat over christmas i seethe with envy i want wings to have thuNDER THIGHs)

that said, it's kinda hard to feel bad for those mfs if they STILL brand animals >:(

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Chapter:14

Jan 18, 2025

To:Steward McOy

when you foreshadowed menacing critim i expected more my soul hasn't shattered

in all seriousness though, I don't think there is a single entry I've read this year where the "flanderization" aspect isn't present, and I've been thinking about it in general
I feel like most of my bitching in every single chonkerpost ends up going on a tangent about characters gstting sidelined, not developed enough, etc.
is this a first draft issue? a time issue? a word count issue? because i've read standalone novels with big-ish casts that can at least develop 3-4 characters (anything more and they tread dangerous territory imo, unless they are chonkers)

the reason why I don't agree with it being flanderization is because that would imply deeper characters that get flatter as time goes on, and at least in my case, only two got any real development ahHaHh
it's a vol 1 "conclusion" rather than a real ending which is why I don't mind, but now I'm left wondering how many people this applies to regardless of how closed their ending was

as for everything else... :hfpat:

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:43

Jan 18, 2025

favorite punk bank

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Chapter:11

Jan 18, 2025

To:Kirb

nerd

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Chapter:10

Jan 18, 2025

two exposition dreams in a row lesgoo

also

arwain
rwain
wain
wai
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hi
him
himb
himbo

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Chapter:8

Jan 18, 2025

there is only on gender arwain is an objekt

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Chapter:6

Jan 18, 2025

dingleberry literly me actually

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Chapter:5

Jan 18, 2025

I can't help but picture this as a videogame where the narrator is constantly pausing to give tutorials, except in this case it's character bios
I thought the story was from arwain's pov but it apparently it's omniscient?

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Chapter:4

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