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Novelist ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦ 27/M
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Jun 04, 2023
Man, those students really don’t pull any punches! Not even Seko or Zhang. Glad to see our MC, Ravel has a bit of empathy though.
Defintely gave me “Subaru entering the loothouse” vibes at the end with the suspense. His other-world welfare program is similar too, a dead phone that he can’t eat or drink. I look forward to what happens next.
It could just be me, but I think that maid is hiding something. she’s mastered the “customer service” voice at least, it’s one I know well 😂
Interesting character dynamic going on between the leads. I was worried after the cliffhanger (literally in this case) but it worked out. The “I hate you too” line took me by surprise, but it worked.
I love the imagery in this chapter, I really felt like I was stepping into the wilderness with him. ❄️ I hope their paths may cross again soon post-time skip…
Don’t mess with the sun bear 🐻 I read part of this before, but it’s really come a long way with edits. Good start, but a painful one for Irori.
You get right into the action, and some darker themes on this one. These are the kinds of stories I typically like to read. I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Oliver must be a pretty brave lad to want to go back so soon to the village after what they tried to do to him and Chiyo. I just hope it works out for the best…
The small programmer in me loved that you used JSON Null as his screen name, and the possible implications of doing so. I cant wait to see how he tanks raid boss AOE attacks 💥
You can, in fact, find a lot of pretty art on Pixiv… We get more of a look into Haru’s character in this installment. I hope Grace is just the thing he needs to regain some of his color.
Jun 03, 2023
I like both of these plants 🌱 and I wish them a very “get together!” also pizza time reference, I love it.
Shinji definitely knows something, but I wonder how involved he is? I liked the group date scenario, all the characters meshed pretty well.
I’m glad we got a bit more background in this chapter after jumping directly into the action to start. I think it was a good choice to flash back a bit.
Fear without understanding can make entire communities of people do dumb stuff. At least our MC seems to think for himself.
To:Harmonica Writes
I was totally thinking of Rin too!! Especially the cute smirk, and bluntness. 😆 Either way, I liked the interactions. Reminded me of playing lol
