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Jun 17, 2023

I’m happy to finally be able to start this one. A sudden thing to spring on someone at the end, I wonder if our MC is the type to agree to something like taking in a runaway? I agree that playing with the space on the page by breaking up paragraphs would be a good idea. Overall a nice start, I like the imagery. 🚂

On the Railway Wire

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2023

I like the solid mix of gang story mixed with the wholesome romance that you’re developing. I’ve read quite a few stories so far, but yours stands out as striking a really nice balance. It looks like the members of the group date found their own little romance too 💖

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:8

Jun 17, 2023

Even if Shinji can’t fully be trusted, it’s true that he saved Akari and Ryochi in his own way. I do agree that they should tread carefully, but interested to see what he means by “get to know them better”. Is his end-game to try to recruit Akari into the Vipers? I’m looking forward to seeing what will happen going forward.

Pretty Boy Gangster

Chapter:7

Jun 17, 2023

We get a bunch of McWholesomeness 🍔 and a look at our main Mami at the end. I thought the reactions were all pretty cute, nice first chapter.

McMami

Chapter:1

Jun 17, 2023

I like the Einstein quote 🧠 And it looks like the seniors and juniors quickly settled their differences, and are coming together as a team. Which is necessary if they want to win games together going forward.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:9

Jun 17, 2023

Alice was right. So the cycle continues, and he has another favor to repay. I’m really not sure what to make of Konya. He’s a complex individual. I want to like him, but I’d like to find out his true motivation first.

Cursed Lines

Chapter:5

Jun 17, 2023

I remember when I went to physical therapy for my knee after a football injury, and all the stress tests I had to do. Though, I didn’t have a cute girl to help me through. Count your blessings, Ichiro!

When the Air was Filled with Petrichor

Chapter:5

Jun 17, 2023

Things are about to get pretty complicated for Thelian, and I have no doubt Chika can give him a run for his money. Even despite his own brilliance. I really like the emperor, he seems like the kind of guy that enjoys life no matter what is thrown his way. Even poison. 🧪

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:5

Jun 17, 2023

We have our newest useless goddess to challenge Aqua for her throne, I only hope Dominion is wearing pantsu. 🗿 As far as LitRPG set-ups go, I actually like this quite a bit. If it were me I would have taken a mixture of the mage and Paladin classes. ⚔️

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:7

Jun 17, 2023

I’m getting the feeling Madam Claire might know more about Jun than she’s letting on. 🤔 She’s being awfully mysterious about multiversal theory too. I just had a rather crazy thought, if the alternate universe version of Amamiya is Mia… Would that mean there’s an alternate version of Hiroyuki too? 👀 Or is he inhabiting his own body like in Avatar?

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:8

Jun 16, 2023

Anyone who’s watched fruit of Grisaia would tell you that you should ALWAYS pay attention when it comes to bus and exit safety 🚌 and for that reason the “My death is just a few days away” flag hit me little different lol. What was I waffling about? Oh yeah, I feel like we’re getting closer to Astella with each chapter. My soul needs that reveal.

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:8

Jun 16, 2023

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*one mean guitar solo later* 🎸

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:7

Jun 16, 2023

Man… if he liked Akane’s band so much he should have just produced them, 🎸 Not to mention they seem to have a good bit of chemistry outside the music venue as well 👀 It seems he still has reservations.

The Nerd's Love for the Popular Girl's Secret Indie Band

Chapter:3

Jun 16, 2023

🕺🏻 I’m ready go tonight

There's a party, alright

We don’t need the reason for joy oh yeah 🕺🏻

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:6

Jun 16, 2023

In my head-canon they’re playing Rocket League because that’s the game I sweat at. 🚘 This guy Ricardo sounds like Dellor lmao. OMG, is Og-dog a secret toes man!? It must have been quite the rager…

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:7

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