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Jul 08, 2023
Interesting coloring/lighting dynamic, Jace is drawn to Momokas dark hair, Momoka loved the paleness of Jace.
The way the phoenixes behave is surprisingly contemporary. Nobody paid attention in the meeting except on how cute Momoka was...
Ooooh what kind of past does Momoka share with the myth hunters? Maybe some family members of hers were killed
Liking the tension here, enjoyed Jace's power of observation about how the werewolves moved with one another.
The inside of this palace has to be super bright since Jace might just be shining all the time. I like these descriptions.
I have been playing final fantasy so I kept thinking about the game whenever you mentioned the phoenix haha
Nice interaction where Anne-Marie sorta inadvertently calms Ogden down even though he was sorta freaking out about texting. Also cool how she kinda just lists all his nerdy personality traits as something she vibes with.
To:minatika
Yeah I'm liking this change!!!
Toyoshima speaking truth from experience. :O
To:Kitsune
I don't think you missed anything. I had originally put more hints in earlier chapters but it didn't feel necessary since I explain what's happening in the first few paragraphs of the next chapter anyway.
I liked the use of the screenplay as the frame narrative. ^^
Jul 07, 2023
Kinda interesting how much of Fumiko's personality is just childhood things, definitely relate to this nostalgia for more innocent times...
Ngl I get that the flashback was supposed to highlight some regrets and mistakes but some of the things Eric said gave me some huuuuuge red flags. Kenta was probably better off without her!
As strange as it is to feel this strongly about someone from grade school, it does kind of explain a lot of this trauma...
Sorry, Kenta!