Jul 13, 2023

Bread starter?! 🤩 Oh man I've got some sourdough starter in my cabinet I've been fermenting and feeding for a little while, I'm so excited to turn it into bread (might have to do that soon~ inspired now 🤣) I'm excited to see bread starter show up in a story!!

...I should not be reading this in the middle of the night when I shouldnt eat, but I'm really hungry 😆 that breakfast sounds amazing. The soup, the bread, the venison...and omurice too. Mm. I might need to get a snack 🤣

Glad the sparks of romance are already here! Estelle is aiming for his heart 💘

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Jul 13, 2023

Giving this a read, I feel like it is perhaps inspired by personal experience? 😉 It feels very realistic!! Now all you need is the long TSA security lines and the Customs Declarations between each country and it'll be too real 🤣

I'm excited to see what experiences await him in Japan 💕 I'm getting slice-of-life vibes here and SOLs are some of my favs! <3

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Jul 13, 2023

Hiromi is so pure and so happy to spend time with the family ☺️ it just warms my heart 💕 I hope to be so happy like that one day!!

Kiyoshi's behavior somehow makes me think he's...a little tsundere? 🤭 And might still have a crush on Hiromi, even knowing about the gender~? Maybe? (I can dream 😄) Minato and Hiromi's texts were so cute though too!

One week of high school completed! ✌️ Hiromi is doing great!!

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Jul 13, 2023

To:Henrico

xxxHolic is a favorite of mine!! 🤩 So to be compared to that is amazing! Thank you for taking the time to read! I always appreciate it 💕 Really it makes me so happy ☺️
I have been keeping up with your chapters and I am loving the baseball club so far 😁 I have been busy these last few days so I did not have time to comment, forgive me 🙏 but I'm still very excited for Neo's adventures!! 😆🐾

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Jul 13, 2023

I was a little nervous to give this a read, simply because a story revolving around the word "ugly" can get well...ugly 😂 What I mean to say is, it gets into actually a very sensitive moral and philosophical debate about the concept of beauty -- what does beauty/ugliness mean to people? Who decides what's beautiful? What if people have different tastes? What judgements are "okay" to make vs "not okay"? None of these questions have a single answer, of course, but I'm curious to see how you'll tackle them over the narrative! 😆 With Ravel showing that he's different than his friends, and maybe less hung up on appearance, I have some hope here!!

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Jul 13, 2023

I'm glad to hear you had a good break, and happy to have you back!! I genuinely missed seeing your story updates. I remember a few days ago I was looking at my notifications and let out a small sigh, thinking "I really miss Nanna and Paltar..." Because reading about their adventures just always has such a good vibe and it makes me smile 😆 💕 I don't know how to describe it. Either way, I'm glad you're back!! Now, onto the chapter~

Oooh an abyss between them and the next area that awaits. Nanna can cross, but Paltar isn't so lucky. The bridge with the threads seems right in tune with his skillset, except he's not able to reach it...which is where Nanna can help 😉 I really like that you gave them a challenge that required both of their skills to resolve!! (Though can you call flying one of Nanna's skills? 🤣 I guess so long as she's a goose, it works! It makes me curious now what skills and hobbies she had when she was human.)

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Jul 13, 2023

To:SkeletonIdiot

Bamboo is sort of edible 😆 a lot of species aren't edible (just like a lot of mushrooms aren't) but there are *some* breeds of edible bamboo. Usually the part you cook and eat is the shoot, which is basically the root of the plant just as it starts to grow (so you don't eat a fully grown stalk.) Bamboo shoots need to be boiled for awhile to get out any toxins, and shouldn't be eaten raw (similar to cassava or potatoes.) All that said, basically the short of it is: generally don't try to eat wild bamboo 😆 but canned or cooked bamboo is safe and can be really tasty! It's used a lot in Asian dishes.
...This has been your daily bamboo fun facts 😂 🎍🎋 not that you particularly needed to know, but now you do!

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Jul 13, 2023

To:Katsuhito

Limited edition rare Claire in science cosplay figurine 😆 1 in 100 drop rate in the gachapon! But no matter how many times you try for the Mad Scientist Rare, you just get more Claire-birds instead 😂 (or Roki's maybe? I feel like Roki would end up being the common gacha pull 😭 I'm so sorry Roki.)

Ahaha well yes!! My own personal lack of sleep definitely inspired some of this! But in all honesty, none of the characters in my novel are all that close to my own personality. I try not to write author inserts, or anything to close to myself, just out of personal preference 😆 I like writing to escape from my own persona!!

Claire is BACK and Jun is So Happy and things are gonna be good <3 (but of course we gotta introduce new plot stuff to shake things up 😏)

ALSO #BLESS I'm so glad you enjoy my dumb silly sound effects section. Like. I was giggling so much writing that, especially Mia's little confused "Shishi-doink?" with a head tilt. 😤 Precious.

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Jul 13, 2023

To:Deleted User

Yes!!! Jun is okay 💕 just a little tired! We'll bring him back to his usual self next chapter x) this is one of those times where my upload schedule makes a cliffhanger more ominous than intended 😂 since normally you could sneak a peak at the next page to see if he was okay!

I was rather proud of my Forest of the Rising Sun joke (｡◡‿◡) I'm glad you caught it!! ✨

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Jul 13, 2023

To:Kitsune

I don't usually use onomatopoeia for the reasons you mentioned (using "boom pow!!" in the middle of a fight scene often does not work as well as hoped 😂) But I really like bringing in a little bit of sound effects. Especially because it's something so unique to Japanese culture and linguistics, like doki doki, kira kira, giri giri, that kind of thing! So since I'm writing an anime inspired LN 🤣 I just cannot resist the opportunity to do stuff like that. Since I can't put it in my normal (more western-styled) writing.
🫶 Claire is back and I'm so glad everyone is happy to see her return 💕 she's truly a character I didn't know how much I missed until she wasn't there these last few chapters!

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Jul 13, 2023

Ooh we start at Ichika's house. I'm immediately assuming things with Sumi didn't pan out, but I shall wait to see~

As usual Papa is growling and casually mentioning guns 😭 at least the cookies might make up for it!! No ero-magazines though? 😏 Haruhi just keep looking. The BL novels are hiding in there somewhere...

Ah okay, he's just staying at Ichika's for a bit then, and afterwards off to see Sumi! Let's see how this works out. I hope Haruhi doesn't get too distracted by his cooking show, and accidentally stand up Sumi 😂

Also RIP John III 😭 that poor cookie dough didn't deserve that fate. ♨️🔥🚒 2023 - 2023.

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Jul 13, 2023

To:Lucid Levia

Honestly bamboo in soup is one of my favorite things 😋 I cook it myself since I don't have any good restaurants nearby that make Japanese food 🤣 My next goal is to learn to make decent sushi!!

Claire missed out on the whole plot event 🤣 she was just out shopping with Horace. You know, casually, like you do! (Jkjk, Claire is not the villain of this piece) But 💕 Claire focused chapter next!!! I'm excited for it! 👀 That ending line will definitely be brought back hehe~

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Jul 13, 2023

I like to support authors who haven't had any viewership yet!! So I am giving your story some likes and reading through it :D

I find this impossible city to be an interesting concept, and I'm hoping Nicholas, Abram, and Aisha can survive (but Abram and Aisha have been kidnapped!! Ahh! 😱) And Aurora is a new interesting character! My only advise right now would be to keep at it and keep practicing your writing 😁 things seem to happen a little fast at times! So I would recommend reading other books and seeing how other authors structure their dialogue and events, and practicing that along in your own work! (But I only say this because of your author's comment in chapter 2. If you don't want feedback right now please feel free to disregard!!) I wish you luck and hope you have fun writing 💕

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Jul 13, 2023

To:Shulox

Trying to explain a shishi-odoshi while extremely sleepy is one of the hardest things 🤣 I tried to describe it to a friend in the past and totally failed. Roki is channeling that energy!

Just walking home 😏 totally innocent! Nothing suggestive here hehe 😁

Roki is lucky indeed! But we are building up here for Saturday's chapter 💕 I hope it will be exciting!! Hahaha and yes, I upload around 17 ~ 18:00 Atlantic standard time! I think it is 1 hour behind Argentina 😆 so 18-19:00 your time!

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Jul 13, 2023

Aw man those first few paragraphs hit hard 😭 is it selfish to relate to the feeling of seeing half fantasy, half reality, but feeling disconnected from both worlds? Maybe that's just the nature of creativity, though?

I like that Ashiya is opening up a bit! "You don't have a chance with Kukai, you know, yah?" 🤣🤣🤣 Oooh Ashiya-san though! She sees through everything, doesn't she? 💕 I'm starting to like her more and more.

"Rakuro IS a normal girl!" Absolute truths right there 😤 I like it!! 👍 Takuro feels a bit guilty for only liking Kukai's appearance, but I think that's a good thing for him to experience.

But Takuro and Ashiya watching a movie together, just the two of them? 😁 I'm seeing this romantic direction!! And I'm so excited for it!

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